Original Song: Diamond in the Gutter

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This is my latest original. I'd love your thoughts. I was going for two narrative voices, me and Jesus. So, it's supposed to be a conversation. I'm not sure how clearly that comes across. I tried 3-part harmony to make it work, but couldn't get it to sit properly. Most likely due to my own vocal inadequacies. But I'd like to know if it's clear. If not, any advice would be much appreciated.

Thanks in advance for your advice and wisdom.

John

[video=youtube;c5JThVeTLSU]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5JThVeTLSU[/video]
 
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Thanks for the encouragement, Willie-T!
 
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