We Walk on Shards that Pierce Our Feet

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Rachel20

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May 7, 2013
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We walk on shards that pierce our feet
Bits of broken glass that litter the street
We step not lightly and so they shatter skin
And they enter through , to torment within


Their jagged ends are rough to touch
We built them ourselves dreaming much
Of beauty and love and soaring dreams
Which come crashing in soundless screams


We took a piece of glass, we were curious
What was this like snow, real yet spurious
And we drew a long red line across our wrists
When pain gushed through we kept the trysts


We blinded ourselves in our apathy
We didn’t want to see the truth and reality
So we grabbed our compliments and flattery
We received when we taped it with prosperity


We walked again and again in streets of blood
Poured out from ourselves and those we loved
Like a raging flood , it covered our houses
First in our hearts, then into oceans


We walk in streets that are torn by war
Not waged by kings or countries for
Land, but for children, driven apart
by people with the shards that tore their heart


We walk in places where the hunger
For love, for food, burns deeper
Than any fireworks that could light a sky
We walk in cities and then slowly die


We walk in places almost never heard
Afraid of death, loss of dignity which is absurd
Since we lost it all, already, we laid it on the streets
When we walked on shards that pierced our feet
 

Rachel20

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May 7, 2013
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About this Poem -


While this poem clearly depicts angst and sorrow at the world, what I wanted to do was also express the innocence of people (unknowingly hurting themselves over glass shards that scatter the street, being "curious".)


We walk in a broken world and often we forget that. We numb ourselves and grow cold in apathy.

Personally, my favourite is stanza 6, talking about how the most affected are the most innocent - our children.

While a few of them actually face real war in some parts of the world, most face wars in their own homes.
Homes that are destabilized and torn apart - by their parents separating, abuse and what not.


As you read this poem, do look beyond the usual existential despair. I hope you enjoy reading it.


God bless