Poem about people selfishness?

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Jakob

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Jul 15, 2014
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Okay.. So this might seem selfish of me to write, but the purpose of this poem was to say to those selfish people who think the world is spinning around only them. Those people who is like "Im SO sad. I didnt get the new iPhone. **** my life! :( "
I dont know whether it's only teenagers, but I think a lot of adults have that same too..

Could you tell me the first impression of the poem is? without me explaining why I wrote it, would people understand?

Do you see the world with two eyes?
How the world really is?
Do you hear other peoples cries?
Or did you never grow up?
Hating people, cause you do not understand?
People who hate people come together in hand?
So you can cry and agree and be happy..

You cant talk to me
You cant talk to me
If you're lonely you can talk to me..

You can do whatever, yes you can even complain,
there will always be people who have a worse pain.
I know that there is one who has it more diffucult than me,
so i look above myself, and you're dumb as far as i can see.
If you want to be free, then you let it be.

You cant talk to me.
You cant talk to me.
If you're lonely you can talk to me..

If you are sad, because it's the day and it's rain,
and it feels so tough cause you only see your own pain.
Do you search happiness in materialstic stuff?
Dont you know, that you will never get enough?
You have to let your ego go, and help others, not just complain.

You cant talk to me.
You cant talk to me.
If you're lonely you can talk to me..

But,
have you lost a person, and are you filled with fear,
do you feel sorrow and dont know why we are here.
Do you walk just to walk, and stand just to fall?
Down in the confusious nihilism you call?
Then talk to me.

But,
have you lost a smartphone, do you cry just to cry,
filled with ego, and expect me to look into your eye.
thinking that, you deserve more attention than any other,
not knowing that we are all equal, the garbage man is our brother.
Then don't talk to me.
 

Jakob

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Jul 15, 2014
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the thought is pregnant again today, I wonder if the child is gonna be okay
Hating a way of thinking, now I dont hate YOU. Cause you are just sinking, unaware what to do
 
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That reminds me a cartoon where a car crashed and, when the ambulance came, in it rush, it picked the torn pieces and, as if they had forgotten something important, they rushed back to lift another thing that they left: A flat and broken tire...

When they left, making that sound,
they passed by THE MAN, who wast hurt,
sucked of red blood. :(