What are your thoughts on this poem I wrote years ago?

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Socreta

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#1
It's titled "You Used To Love Me"

We always talked, you seem to always cry
Now though you treat me l like I've died
We used to be close, but why we're so apart
I did nothing could of broken your heart
I'm there for you, I will never leave you
I been there after all that you been through
You used to love me, I remember the days
We helped each other in every single way
The day you gave your life to me remember
It was my birthday, a cold night I'm December
That was my gift, the best I could receive
Until the day you let yourself be so deceived
Wanting a better life, you want more love
Where you end up, you won't get the same love
You may not feel the same but I still love you
You may hate me but I still love you
I long for the day you return to me
The imperative request to whom have forsaken me
The choice is yours, I sit back and ponder
That you used to love me, but now I wonder
If you will come back to me, till then I somber
Sincerely Jesus Christ
 
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skylove7

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#3
That's beautiful Socreta! :)