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    Default The birds sang

    The pain was so heavy
    The clouds were so gray
    The birds sang in silence
    On weakened knees I prayed

    The sun shown no light
    The storm didn't pass
    I hid in your secret place
    Hoping for death to come fast

    My heart was so heavy
    My feet had no strength
    The birds sang in silence
    I endured this at length

    I looked out the window
    I watched for the birds
    I didn't find one
    Their silence was heard

    I prayed "dear God do something"
    This silence I cannot bear
    The pain is so heavy
    In me there is a tare

    The Lords hand entered my heart
    The feeling was so real
    Plucked out of me was a tare
    That wouldn't let me heal

    Then all of a sudden
    As if in a flash
    The sun was so bright
    The storm indeed passed

    My heart was so light
    My feet became strong
    The enduring was over
    The birds sang a new song
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    Default Re: The birds sang

    This is very good!
    I am assuming you wrote it
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    Default Re: The birds sang

    Wonderful poem.

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    Default Re: The birds sang

    Quote Originally Posted by TemporaryCircumstances View Post
    This is very good!
    I am assuming you wrote it
    Yes I did. I remeber when I was a teenager i used to write a lot of poems & short stories & then life happened & I stopped. I'm very rusty but it brings me joy to write. Thank you for your encouragement.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Sillychick723 View Post
    Yes I did. I remeber when I was a teenager i used to write a lot of poems & short stories & then life happened & I stopped. I'm very rusty but it brings me joy to write. Thank you for your encouragement.
    Well it's very very very good!!!!
    Keep writing!
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    Default Re: The birds sang

    Beautiful poem!
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