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    Default Musings On Clouds

    Musings On Clouds

    A drop of rain,
    A thousand thoughts.
    A drop of rain,
    Two thousand thoughts.
    A vision in the distance,
    A million miles away.
    Is it real,
    Or an illusive dream,
    Like a mansion in the sky.
    A sip of coffee,
    A powdery heaven,
    Misty eyes;
    Father Divine
    And through my mind
    Of fluffy clouds on
    Lemon pie.
    With each morsel I swallow
    That fills the hollow
    Of something missing
    Displacing the hunger
    With sweet ambrosia.
    A breath, a sigh,
    A little cry
    And warmth surrounds me

    His Spirit is here,
    And comes inside.

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    Default Re: Musings On Clouds

    I like the title. Sometimes it is hard to think about titles!

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    Default Re: Musings On Clouds

    Quote Originally Posted by mar09 View Post
    I like the title. Sometimes it is hard to think about titles!
    thanks for reply...yeah for me not only sometimes but many times it's hard to find a title
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    Default Re: Musings On Clouds

    I like the brevity of the lines here. Makes it to where each word has a weight to carry and a role to play which IMO they do.

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