Moonlight Driftings

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DustyRhodes

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Dec 30, 2016
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Moonlit Driftings

I live today
In every way
With comfort from above,
Of God's sweet love.
Within the power
Of every hour
Dancing in the moonlight,
Twinkling of starbright.
Heavenly incantations

Life's celebrations
Of magical togetherness,
Loving foreverness.
And when we meet
Upon that seat
Of grandeur overflowing
That leaves us always knowing,
The time is right
To dance all night
Spirit of love, always blowing.

 
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This one has a lot of weak rhymes and cliches. I like the final few lines but I'd rework this one entirely.