Walking Home From Chipotle

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Walking Home From Chipotle and its 24 outside!
One mile of freezing hell as I take my steady stride

The West Wind on my face like a hundred bloody knives
It keeps beating to the bone in one hundred icy rives

Eyes kept to the ground there's a dead robin to the side
I pity him myself, that poor bird he couldn't fly

Over fifty warm families in their cars go driving by
I wait at the light to cross their coursing steely tide

A charming snow starts falling, one million pretty lies
Their beauty is beguiling these unforgiving brutal skies

My flesh is screaming questions for a thousand reasons why
My breath escapes my body in a steaming vapored sigh

I finally reach my door and haply open wide
And now I write my journey while I'm sitting warm inside.
 
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You are a brave soul. If my walk home from Chipotle was any more than an average city block, I would need to remove my jeans and skivvies and burn them when I got home. Gut Drain-O.
 
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You are a brave soul. If my walk home from Chipotle was any more than an average city block, I would need to remove my jeans and skivvies and burn them when I got home. Gut Drain-O.
Lol oh I'm quite used to walking, it was just really cold! Heh thought the bones of the poem as I was walking. It's a true story for sure lol.

Besides the physical benefits of walking, I find I do some of my best thinking and poetry that will never get committed to writing while I walk. It just flows so naturally as I step. One of the silver linings to being relatively poor I guess.
 
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Lol oh I'm quite used to walking, it was just really cold! Heh thought the bones of the poem as I was walking. It's a true story for sure lol.

Besides the physical benefits of walking, I find I do some of my best thinking and poetry that will never get committed to writing while I walk. It just flows so naturally as I step. One of the silver linings to being relatively poor I guess.
No worries man. I wasn't really trying to trash your thread. It's just when someone mentions Chipotle or Taco Bell...or Buffalo Wild Wings...I get a shiver and I break out in a cold sweat from the memories.
 
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No worries man. I wasn't really trying to trash your thread. It's just when someone mentions Chipotle or Taco Bell...or Buffalo Wild Wings...I get a shiver and I break out in a cold sweat from the memories.
Oh no worries, didn't take it that way at all. Lol I would tell you if I did lol.

Heh, oh man some BW3s sounds good, but that's a heck of a walk!
 

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Walking Home From Chipotle and its 24 outside!
One mile of freezing hell as I take my steady stride

The West Wind on my face like a hundred bloody knives
It keeps beating to the bone in one hundred icy rives

Eyes kept to the ground there's a dead robin to the side
I pity him myself, that poor bird he couldn't fly

Over fifty warm families in their cars go driving by
I wait at the light to cross their coursing steely tide

A charming snow starts falling, one million pretty lies
Their beauty is beguiling these unforgiving brutal skies

My flesh is screaming questions for a thousand reasons why
My breath escapes my body in a steaming vapored sigh

I finally reach my door and haply open wide
And now I write my journey while I'm sitting warm inside.
***if I wrote a cool poem---it would be about moving to a warm climate from Chicago...
 
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***if I wrote a cool poem---it would be about moving to a warm climate from Chicago...
Lol I wouldn't mind migrating right about now lol. I love the snow though. I don't mind the cold too much. It's the wind that really gets you. Though you know that being from the Windy City and all, I probably don't even have to tell you lol.
 
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living in a windy and cold city teaches you how to bend your back,
you bend but usually don't see what just one of your fingers could touch,
a thousand miles that have already been walked in silence and often grace.......
 

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Lol I wouldn't mind migrating right about now lol. I love the snow though. I don't mind the cold too much. It's the wind that really gets you. Though you know that being from the Windy City and all, I probably don't even have to tell you lol.
*****maybe you'll move later----my dad was 53 and shoveling snow off of his Chicago roof so it wouldn't cave it------so-----he moved to Florida----he had to watch for gators though...
 
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living in a windy and cold city teaches you how to bend your back,
you bend but usually don't see what just one of your fingers could touch,
a thousand miles that have already been walked in silence and often grace.......
I like how you put that, that waxes poetic in itself. Idk if I'd say I moved in grace though yesterday lol. Moreso moved in quaking and haste lol.
 
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*****maybe you'll move later----my dad was 53 and shoveling snow off of his Chicago roof so it wouldn't cave it------so-----he moved to Florida----he had to watch for gators though...
Yea I'll probably be away from my beloved homeland one day. I thought to myself n the walk of chipotle that I quite love my homeland, but no man has honor in his own city with his own people, how true that verse is.

I have relatives and friends that moved to Florida. Very common for Ohioans. Heh yet they always come back. One of my good friends moved to Miami right before winter this year.