Paradise In Christ

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DustyRhodes

DustyRhodes

Senior Member
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Dec 30, 2016
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When I love you
There are no words,
When I hold you
There is no language .
Together when we dreamed
Paradise entwined our hearts
And you became my saviour.
Flowers and trees became
My world, long ago lost in a
Vacant cavern of darkness.
You are my Lord, my Saviour,
My friend, now life with never end.
 
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Tinuviel

Guest
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I like it a lot :). Very feeling and well-written.
 
Rosyshine

Rosyshine

Senior Member
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Feb 26, 2017
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Very heartfelt. Love those first four lines. They struck my heart; nicely done.

 
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MorningFlower

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Sweetly written.
 
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