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    Default Paradise In Christ

    When I love you
    There are no words,
    When I hold you
    There is no language .
    Together when we dreamed
    Paradise entwined our hearts
    And you became my saviour.
    Flowers and trees became
    My world, long ago lost in a
    Vacant cavern of darkness.
    You are my Lord, my Saviour,
    My friend, now life with never end.
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    I like it a lot . Very feeling and well-written.
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    Every good gift and every perfect gift is from above, and cometh down from the Father of lights, with whom is no variableness, neither shadow of turning.
    ~James 1:17

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tinuviel View Post
    I like it a lot . Very feeling and well-written.
    Thanks so much
    I appreciate your comment and feelings.
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    Default Re: Paradise In Christ

    Very heartfelt. Love those first four lines. They struck my heart; nicely done.


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    Sweetly written.
    Psalms 143:8.

    "Let the morning bring me word
    of your unfailing love,
    for I have put my trust in you.
    Show me the way I should go,
    for to you I lift up my soul. "


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