*In Present Awe...*

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MorningFlower

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I wrote this poem sometime in my early 20s. I felt as sharing this one with you in here, there may perhaps be some small mistakes here and there, but since I wrote this quite some time ago I won't change it. Not all of the poems I share are very recent, the two first ones I shared are very recent written ones. But I think it is also nice to share from my earlier poems too. I find it a bit funny I used the sentence soul clink in this poem here, I wanted to find something which rhymed with King. ;) :)

*In Present Awe...*

I lift up my voice to the throne,
in present awe for my King.
My words, actions and deeds are all known,
tunes from my heart I do bring.I bow my face down to the ground,
in present awe for my King.
Peaceful silence touches me all around,
quiet praises open up it's wing.I fall down on my knees,
in present awe for my King.
Hearing those powerful words I miss,
weeping beautiful worship from my soul clink.

I open up my heart in glorious might,
in present awe for my King.
Salvation isn't dark but bright,
my mind makes my mouth sing.

In present awe for my King,
worship from my heart I bring.
In present awe for my King,
joyful praises from my soul I sing.

By: MorningFlower.
 
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MorningFlower

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Or you can also look at my other first thread of this same titled poem, as there I put the sentences under each other as it is supposed being written together. I am not allowed making any more changes it seemes and this one got all the sentences all messed up now. :(
 
ChristCenteredGirl

ChristCenteredGirl

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Very nice poem. :) I pay more attention to the heart of the message the poem delivers than little mistakes it might have.
 
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MorningFlower

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ChristCenteredGirl said:
Very nice poem. :) I pay more attention to the heart of the message the poem delivers than little mistakes it might have.
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Thank you. :)

It was mostly one word I wanted to correct and then the rest of how I like placing the sentences put together under each other got messed up, I like to put my poems in the order which I have written them in. If you look at the other same thread title then the poem is written in the correct order. It is just that I may have edited this too many times and then it doesn't let me edit more after a sort of limit or something like this?
 
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