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    Default A Forever Journey

    As the rain pelts on my window,
    I look into the distance and see nothing
    As I am sailing to those distant shores
    Of the unknown memories that lie
    In vacant lots of a love filled mind.
    See things I had never seen before,
    Thinking things that were once
    Beyond my imagination.
    I hope I never get to that place,
    The place where everything has been seen
    And analyzed and described and ratified.
    Let me rather float upon those waves
    Of mystical spells of wonder of the
    Beauty that exists somewhere,
    At some time, at some place.
    Waiting to be discovered unexpectedly.
    I ask only this, as a humble favor from above,
    That wherever I go, let it be with you Lord.

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    It is a nicely written poem.

    I really like this part:

    "I ask only this, as a humble favor from above,
    That wherever I go, let it be with you Lord."



    But I don't get quite this part:

    "Let me rather float upon those waves
    Of mystical spells of wonder of the
    Beauty that exists somewhere,"

    Especially the part about "mystical spells?", what good does a spell bring out?

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    Default Re: A Forever Journey

    Quote Originally Posted by MorningFlower View Post
    It is a nicely written poem.

    I really like this part:

    "I ask only this, as a humble favor from above,
    That wherever I go, let it be with you Lord."



    But I don't get quite this part:

    "Let me rather float upon those waves
    Of mystical spells of wonder of the
    Beauty that exists somewhere,"

    Especially the part about "mystical spells?", what good does a spell bring out?
    As always, than you very much
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