Poem about love?

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Jakob

Senior Member
Jul 15, 2014
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People seem to join when there's noise,
people seem to yell help louder than Gods voice.

People seem to accuse the broken-hearted liar,
People seem to gather 'round a burning fire.

People seem to praise the one's they agree,
People seem to talk when they are on the flee.

People seem to show their own ego and I,
people seem to laugh while asking why.

Thus it happen with the hearts we found.
Like it's minerals we carry around.
We dropped it, or perhaps some did,
maybe in a relationship or as a kid.

We can't glue the amethyst back together,
but with Gods help, we dont fear any weather.
As we hold the broken pieces in our hands,
we glance at others minerals as the vision expands.

We wont FEAR the stone falling from our hands once more,
we wont THINK when we look at the stone "what was it all for?"
Cause God gave us strengh, cause he loves us.
 

Jakob

Senior Member
Jul 15, 2014
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#3
thank you kind soul :)
 
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MorningFlower

Guest
#4
It is nice, yeah. Also has a special "something" over it. I found especially this part special:

"We can't glue the amethyst back together,
but with Gods help, we dont fear any weather.
As we hold the broken pieces in our hands,
we glance at others minerals as the vision expands.

We wont FEAR the stone falling from our hands once more,
we wont THINK when we look at the stone "what was it all for?"
Cause God gave us strengh, cause he loves us."

It makes the poem more interesting, I think. Nice written touch to it. :)