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    Default A castle of pain

    There’s so many wounds deep inside my veins.
    I’m locked, I am all alone in my castle of pain.
    It is so deep, within my broken heart.
    A heart that is wounded and torn apart.

    The walls of that castle are unshakeable, more than a stone.
    They are built from rebuffs, pain and sorrow.
    And in the tower, there’s a little room
    where a little girl cries in darkness, in gloom.

    That little girl is me, lost in the world.
    Looking for protection, and for kind word.
    Looking for Savior, who’ll save her from remorse.
    Looking for happiness, a prince on a white horse.

    Asking her question: Am I worthy of love?
    A calming voice whispered "yes" from somewhere above.
    And suddenly she realized, she’s not here alone.
    There’s someone with her, outside the door.

    With little hesitation she unlocks the door,
    and there is her King, in shining armor.
    He wrapped His arms around her, and told her “I’m here”.
    She finally smiled, without any fear.

    He was there, He’s come for her, to save her from pain,
    He was there to lead her out from darkness into day.
    All I can say is “Thank you, my Lord Jesus,
    for saving me, seeing me, from showing me my purpose.”


    Thank you, Lord, for being here for me. For breaking down the walls I had built around my heart. For Your healing touch, Your mercy and love which I do not deserve and yet, I am blessed with it.

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    Praise God who is ever loving and powerful to break the chains of bondage ! Ever grateful, mam ,for sharing!
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    Default Re: A castle of pain

    Beautiful, I really enjoyed this
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    I am really glad you like it
    God helped me overcome a difficult seasons in my life and I am grateful, that He was always there for me. Even when I was lost, He was there to calm me down and to show me that He can turn the greatest mess into a greatest blessing.

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    Really wonderful and positive poem to the glory of God!!! <3 I heart it!
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    I like this. It's inspiring. No matter what Jesus will pull us away from the darkness
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    This was beautiful. Really inspiring. Keep them coming!
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    Thank you all very much. I really appreciate your words.

    I think that God has put this verses in my mind to share them with others, to show how He is strong when we are weak... To show that I am only a human in need of His mercy, power, love ad grace... I love Him...

    Sometimes I feel like I am going to lock myself in that dark room again, but fortunately He always comes in the right time, just to take my hand, rip away the key from my palm and then He pulls me in His arms and let me feel His love...

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