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    Default What it means to be

    Doomed a death one would never speak
    Seekth a vengance one in the moment one's week
    Blowing out of proportion the sorrowful sound of clamor
    Let not the thy will divert the purpose due to vigor
    bring though thou knownst thy self tamed
    Know not what, I cannot blame
    You follow your father who cannot define
    A path so simple to those who are not blind.
    Grass gross the color of life
    If thou harken intently the noise of strife
    Is not live and evil the same backwards
    Always revolving in a direction onwards
    Pray to God you raging fire
    Meek it may seem not without clear desire
    Lighth thy path in the clearest of light
    Turn thou right into what is right
    It was mistaken as a tragedy
    Set a part like an unclean thing
    There was no thought of a comprimise
    Some people are bad like in anyone's eyes
    Just a victim of insanity
    I am sorry you have take a look at what it means to be
    Just another turn of what is never seen
    Never let what is not known be certain in yourself
    God is truth and I will follow Him all my life
    There is some in the feelings I have
    Above all I am ready to face
    The challenges that appear before my race
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    Default Re: What it means to be

    I like it, try using structure like a sonnet, keep it up.
    'If a man lose ev'rything he owns
    Has he truly lost his worth?
    Or is it the beginning
    Of a new and brighter birth? '


    Control thine thoughts, let not thine thoughts control thee!




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    Default Re: What it means to be

    I am actually using the structure that free verse allows for expression. This is the best structure pattern for expression and creativity. It is also very postmodern.
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    Default Re: What it means to be

    So that is what it means to die......outstanding

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