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    Default Battling the winds and the wave

    This is one of my most disorganized poems written for the neccesity of freeing my mind.... sorry for the miscellaneous arrangement, written pure and unedited......might not be easy to understand but that's the point... betweeon God and i.. enjoy.


    I'm lost, utterly confused and dumbfounded
    The trials of this life too difficult to comprehend
    Why?
    I'm sitting here trying to figure out if i made the right choice or not
    I'm battling the winds and the waves
    Praying to God to take his place
    Slowly seeking, begging and asking for grace.
    Too much to ask? Why?
    This is my whirlpool, my tempting temptations guarded by the doubts of the heart.
    Love, peace : too much to ask? Why?
    Abandoned here, there.... left alone for my cross to bear, lost in the state of confuzzlement

    I pray, think, ask, hope, don't want to be alone, seeking love, seeking his face, seeking you.
    Too much to ask? Why?
    It's my war zone, grace or fake, win or be stumbled, attack or be countered.
    It's a storm i'm left alone to face
    Battling the winds and the wave.
    Tears, scares, fears bottled up in my head
    Waiting to be released into the air
    I beg, plead, seek, wanting to be heard
    Too much to ask?
    Being let down, disappointed, not sure, all formed fake, easy to break, hard to tame, unable to face.
    Battling the winds and the wave
    Don't hurt others, intentionally or not, for you don't know what scar you place upon their hearts. Be good to others as your heavenly father is good to you.

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    Very nice, young lady. I could definitely relate to much of what you wrote in my own life.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Didymous View Post
    Very nice, young lady. I could definitely relate to much of what you wrote in my own life.
    Glad i could be of service... lol
    Don't hurt others, intentionally or not, for you don't know what scar you place upon their hearts. Be good to others as your heavenly father is good to you.

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