my 1st Poem

  • Christian Chat is a moderated online Christian community allowing Christians around the world to fellowship with each other in real time chat via webcam, voice, and text, with the Christian Chat app. You can also start or participate in a Bible-based discussion here in the Christian Chat Forums, where members can also share with each other their own videos, pictures, or favorite Christian music.

    If you are a Christian and need encouragement and fellowship, we're here for you! If you are not a Christian but interested in knowing more about Jesus our Lord, you're also welcome! Want to know what the Bible says, and how you can apply it to your life? Join us!

    To make new Christian friends now around the world, click here to join Christian Chat.
N

NotWhoI

Member
#1
Mar 12, 2013
59
0
6
#1
Lead by Grace to step in faith
seek him first and all he'll add
rainy days to endless glad
What a gift it was to see
glimmer in the deep blue sea
crooked walk, she looks for signs
Swimming now, by Gods design
first encounter, I can see
Treasures worth, so clear to me
Desire to Piracy
How great the weight it would be
dive down deep, that bounty freed
Lifting up for all to see
with out Gods grace and Sovereignty
impossible that task would be
to love her towards eternity
My heart says give and never run
yet not my will, but his be done.
 
X

Xethea

Member
#2
Aug 12, 2013
306
75
28
#2
Where it says in your poem; "her" -who/what is it referring to?
 
N

NotWhoI

Member
#3
Mar 12, 2013
59
0
6
#3
It is about a Man who wants to win the heart of a woman but only wants Gods will
the Her is that woman
 
X

Xethea

Member
#4
Aug 12, 2013
306
75
28
#4
I thought so. Just being sure
 
IDEAtor

IDEAtor

Senior Member
#5
Aug 15, 2012
827
19
18
#5
Not bad for your first poem. Actually it's really good
 
You must log in or register to reply here.