Hey,GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!! Lets write your songs here!!!! It's cool to share, right???

[fightingforthelight]

So... LETS SHARE!!! What do you think??? Or maybe you think that it's unsafe???

God bless

 

[Jon49522]

I don't mind posting mine; actually I would love to get some feedback or ideas if possible. Here is one that I was working on not too long ago, but can't seem to finish (I do have something of a tune as well, but for now I'll just post the lyrics):

Dear God, I thank you
For everything you do
And with this song
I give you praise, and glory

I thank you for my life
And for your sacrifice
You gave your only son
To pay the price

Now I'm proud to be your son
And sing to everyone
Of the wondrous gift you gave
To them that believe

Let me know what you think, I could really use some other peoples' opinions! Oh, and I have a couple more partial lyrics, so if y'all want to look at those as well let me know and I'll post them.

 

[fightingforthelight]

Wow! My goodness I thought that no one will post here Thx!
I really like your song, you know... I would like to hear it!!! Really!

If you don't mind.. I would really love to see your others lyrics too...

I think that everybody would get new ideas if more of us would post our lyrics... But... It's just my opinion. That's it

God bless everyone! And may God give you ideas and new songs from His lips...

Ruta

 

[zeroturbulence]

I think this is a great idea.

 

[CryingRose94]

What if the lyrics are not for a christian song, but just a song about how someone feels! Is that okay to post?

 

[Jon49522]

Wow! My goodness I thought that no one will post here Thx!
I really like your song, you know... I would like to hear it!!! Really!

If you don't mind.. I would really love to see your others lyrics too...

I think that everybody would get new ideas if more of us would post our lyrics... But... It's just my opinion. That's it

God bless everyone! And may God give you ideas and new songs from His lips...

Ruta

Thanks for your support, I'm glad you like it! Since you asked, here is another partial song I've come up with:

(This would be one of the verses)
You can never show it but,
I see it in your eyes:
The hurt, the pain, the fear
The hard times in life.

(This would be the chorus)
You need a physician,
Someone who can heal you now.
You need a musician,
The one who'll make the trumpets sound.
He is joy, He's life, He's peace, He's good,
He is God.

Obviously, I could use some ideas for continuations; please don't hesitate to throw 'em my way if you've got any!

Oh, and maybe I'll try to sing the verses and tune in the YouSing room sometime; I'll post a time and date here if I decide to.

 

[CryingRose94]

Where is that smile you used to bare​

Such a happy little child​

Now you don't seem to care​

About life or love​

Your heart is hardened​

You've put up walls of iron​

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The hurt of your past​

Is the shadow that you cast​

Misery, pain and loss is all you have ever known​

Your true feelings you've never shown​

Oh Sapphyre​

Where is that happy little child​

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Forever wear a mask​

Keep yourself hidden from the past​

All the pain you feel inside ​

Hurts you all the more just to hide!​

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This life cast upon me​

Never the choice to be free​

Forever left to your life of misery!​

The words whispered to you​

You feel your going insane​

You continue to hide your shame​

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The voices that you hear​

Only fill you with more fear​

The things that you see​

That you know are not really there​

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You will soon realize​

It is yourself staring into your eyes​

Oh Sapphyre you tuck it deep​

You will forever remain hidden!​