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zeroturbulence

zeroturbulence

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I don't write stories, but I think some up sometimes... even good ones sometimes. :rolleyes:
 
friendinpeace

friendinpeace

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Haha, 5 minutes before posting this it was not intended to be shared, I do not see punctuation errors as different sentence structure and speaking style, so imgonna say I would rather you do not, on the grounds you would probably change the story significantly. There could be a misprint here and there, but I would not want to see it if it was punctuated differently.

This is my opinion, please don't for,

haha, 5 minutes, before posting this was not intended to be shared I do not, see punctuation errors as different sentence structure and style? so im gonna say, I would rather you do, not on the grounds you would probably change the story significantly, there could be a misprint here and there, but I would not want to see it, if it was punctuated differently...

NO DRUGS allowed in the park

NO, drugs allowed in the park

it is is it it is it is is illegible

"it is," "is it?" "it is," "it is!" is legible

I would never want to kill the leader

I would never want to, kill the leader!

See Blue ladybug, what you might be calling incorrect grammar could be holding a certain meaning, and therefore I would not want you correcting grammar, because it is too easy for somebody else to alter the meaning
 
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blue_ladybug

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friendinpeace said:
Haha, 5 minutes before posting this it was not intended to be shared, I do not see punctuation errors as different sentence structure and speaking style, so imgonna say I would rather you do not, on the grounds you would probably change the story significantly. There could be a misprint here and there, but I would not want to see it if it was punctuated differently.

This is my opinion, please don't for,

haha, 5 minutes, before posting this was not intended to be shared I do not, see punctuation errors as different sentence structure and style? so im gonna say, I would rather you do, not on the grounds you would probably change the story significantly, there could be a misprint here and there, but I would not want to see it, if it was punctuated differently...

NO DRUGS allowed in the park

NO, drugs allowed in the park

it is is it it is it is is illegible

"it is," "is it?" "it is," "it is!" is legible

I would never want to kill the leader

I would never want to, kill the leader!

See Blue ladybug, what you might be calling incorrect grammar could be holding a certain meaning, and therefore I would not want you correcting grammar, because it is too easy for somebody else to alter the meaning
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I never said you had incorrect grammar. :) I just asked if you minded me correcting the typo's and rewording some of the sentences to make it sound better. No biggie. :)
 
friendinpeace

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If you want to, what would be the reason though? misspellings possibly, but what could be seen as misspelled could be a different word, rewording no, I did put thought into wording
 
friendinpeace

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friendinpeace said:
If you want to, what would be the reason though? misspellings possibly, but what could be seen as misspelled could be a different word, rewording no, I did put thought into wording
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Except for "cob out" though it works and you can tell what he meant
 
friendinpeace

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blue_ladybug said:
I never said you had incorrect grammar. :) I just asked if you minded me correcting the typo's and rewording some of the sentences to make it sound better. No biggie. :)
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More posted this to get an opinion of the story as a story, can post more if wanted, what did you think of it?
 
blue_ladybug

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I thought it was.. a little strange but interesting.. :)
 
friendinpeace

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blue_ladybug said:
I thought it was.. a little strange but interesting.. :)
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Appreciate the critique, was an idea which came to me and written down when it did, my program doesn't tell me how many pages I produce, but it actually goes on for a while from there, and builds as it continues, and it is written kinda spontaneously, the character goes on to save people from a burning building, and do several other things where he finds the most disappointing thing people find about him is his lack of confidence, changes his overall attitude, and basically becomes somebody who helps people out, the spirit inclusion to the story becomes more and more his worst enemy, at times even attacking him and attempting to make him think he's not sane, so he doesn't continue, it gets interesting toward where I have currently stopped for now, he actually gets saved himself and as appreciation makes this person a suit, so it builds over time

There are things which makes me feel it would fit on this website, and things which make me think it would be found objectionable
 
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Willie-T

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i like two right allot butt I'm not sure if I do it wright.
 
JesusLives

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U do it betterer than I dew....
 
zeroturbulence

zeroturbulence

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I wont to rite sumtin nise so i can maik lots of monies. :D
 
EmilyNats

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I have written a little in the past. But my problem is that I will come up with a plot line that I love... And then back off when I remember that I'll have to sit there and fill in the gaps. A writing team would do wonders for me, I think, but then who has the time? Especially with the holiday season stalking at our heels now.
 
zeroturbulence

zeroturbulence

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Ugh! Holiday season! Those words should be banned! Everyone's going to be stressing out trying to plan things and buy things and decorate things... they might as well call it the Helliday season! :p
 
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