rate my song....

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relient_k23

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#1
It's just the first two verses so far, but I only started it a day or two ago....I would love feedback...

Freefalling

You found me
Skydiving into the Grand Canyon,
You found me.
Relying
On a parachute made up of all the good things I thought I'd done,
I'm hanging by a thread,
But I know better than
To hope you'll catch me when I fall,
But you catch me.

There's only
So many made up exuses I can use to justify my mistakes,
But now I'm running out,
I know without a doubt
That you never believed a single one.
But you love me.


The arrangemet I have so far is somehing of a mix of acoustic and very light distortion (crunch) electric guitar. Maybe when I finish the song I will take a video of me playing it, and ry to upload it somehow....anywho, I'd love to hear what you have to say.
 

phil36

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Feb 12, 2009
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It would be good to hear it sung and played :)