God's Precious Island

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DustyRhodes

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Dec 30, 2016
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[FONT=&quot] In an ocean of aloneness
You are my fertile island,
Your trees are green
Your flowers speaking to me
In gentle scents and colors
Whispering in soft voices
The beauty you possess.
And in the swaying of palm trees
The soothing sounds
Of waves cascading against
Your shoreline,
There is an irresitable urge
To abide in Your garden forever.
Your coastline welcomes everyone
Yet in the midst of all its fertility
It keeps me there
A most willing prisoner.
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Nov 29, 2016
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Beautiful....I don't know how many years you've been writing poetry but you are a brilliant writer. Well done.
In an ocean of aloneness
You are my fertile island,
Your trees are green
Your flowers speaking to me
In gentle scents and colors
Whispering in soft voices
The beauty you possess.
And in the swaying of palm trees
The soothing sounds
Of waves cascading against
Your shoreline,
There is an irresitable urge
To abide in Your garden forever.
Your coastline welcomes everyone
Yet in the midst of all its fertility
It keeps me there
A most willing prisoner.
 

DustyRhodes

Senior Member
Dec 30, 2016
2,117
599
113
#3
Beautiful....I don't know how many years you've been writing poetry but you are a brilliant writer. Well done.
thanks so much for your comment...i have been writing for
many years and still enjoy doing it...what i write is what is buried in my heart and all i need to
do is find the words :D
 
Nov 29, 2016
151
17
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#4
Aside from the Bible, where else do you get inspiration from to translate into poetry? What other poets or authors out there inspire you?
thanks so much for your comment...i have been writing for
many years and still enjoy doing it...what i write is what is buried in my heart and all i need to
do is find the words :D
 
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MorningFlower

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#5
Beautiful.