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relient_k23

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It's just the first two verses so far, but I only started it a day or two ago....I would love feedback...

Freefalling

You found me
Skydiving into the Grand Canyon,
You found me.
Relying
On a parachute made up of all the good things I thought I'd done,
I'm hanging by a thread,
But I know better than
To hope you'll catch me when I fall,
But you catch me.

There's only
So many made up exuses I can use to justify my mistakes,
But now I'm running out,
I know without a doubt
That you never believed a single one.
But you love me.


The arrangemet I have so far is somehing of a mix of acoustic and very light distortion (crunch) electric guitar. Maybe when I finish the song I will take a video of me playing it, and ry to upload it somehow....anywho, I'd love to hear what you have to say.
 
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Rouge

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Wow, this is really good! It's so awesome :]
Your so lucky you can write like this!
 
zavok

zavok

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Dec 4, 2009
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"To hope you'll catch me when I fall,
But you catch me."

and you have caught my heart :p
 
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relient_k23

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thx guys! i took a video of me playing it so u could hear how it goes...i'll try to upload it.... :)
 
zavok

zavok

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Dec 4, 2009
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thats ok jus being honest
 
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Rouge

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#6
That's awesome! I'd love to see the video :D
 
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relient_k23

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#7
for some reason the video wont work....but I wrote some more:

Chorus:

Why do I feel like I'm always
Freefalling
I'm Freefalling
Into your arms, into your grace
And there's no need to chase after me anymore
Cause I am yours.

3rd verse

You found me
Standing at the top of Niagra Falls
You found me
Completely
Bent on jumping over the edge with a blindfold on
I can't blame someone else, I've done this to myself
I guess I'll have to take the fall.
But you save me.

I may write another verse, I dunno.....
 
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Rouge

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#8
That's to bad about the video :(...But those lyrics are great! Your a crazy awesome writer :D haha
 
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relient_k23

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lol...thx...it's the first one i actually feel is halfway decent...I've probably written about 6 or 7 other songs that just haven't been up to par lol
 
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relient_k23

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oh and as far as band names go....what do you think of these?

Operation Automatic
beFORe HeroIsM
Static Summer
First-class Tragedy
A dreamer's Reality
 
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-Stranger-

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#11
I like A Dreamer's Reality. But then I always like titles with contradictory ideas.
Btw great song.
 
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NodMyHeadLikeYeah

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relient_k23 said:
oh and as far as band names go....what do you think of these?

Operation Automatic
beFORe HeroIsM
Static Summer
First-class Tragedy
A dreamer's Reality
Click to expand...

First class tragedy, i would also go with winnie the pooh
 
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relient_k23

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ok thanks.....lol interesting sig NodMyHead :-D
 
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