Yet another..."Renew My Mind"

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Jordache

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https://www.evernote.com/shard/s170...6918308d42bd/ce1b12b7d0889ce625002df9881a2223

This is my first attempt at 3/4.

Renew My Mind

Sometimes they're spinning circles 'round the clefts inside my brain
Cascading down in ugliness and inexplicable pain
with darkest voices they disguise themselves as simple truth, so plain

I find I'm walking in directions that are paved in shame
and too often I'm in question over what you say

Renew my mind
you are transforming me
Cleanse my dreams
oh release me unto faithful peace

Sometimes I'm not sure who's voice it is
It's clouding up inside
and at times I block them out I find there's rarely place to hide


The battleground is riddled with arrows
and the enemy is prowling
 
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Jordache

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Oh it's mp4 on apple
 
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kenisyes

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Your singing really puts it over. But there has got a be a better word for inexplicable - just so many syllables.
 
JoshJoseph2

JoshJoseph2

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Jun 19, 2011
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You have a nice voice, thanks for sharing!
 
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dalemilbourn

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Your voice is very soothing and pleasant jordache just completely perfect to bring a special feel of the song.
 
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