Musings On Clouds

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DustyRhodes

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Musings On Clouds

A drop of rain,
A thousand thoughts.
A drop of rain,
Two thousand thoughts.
A vision in the distance,
A million miles away.
Is it real,
Or an illusive dream,
Like a mansion in the sky.
A sip of coffee,
A powdery heaven,
Misty eyes;
Father Divine
And through my mind
Of fluffy clouds on
Lemon pie.
With each morsel I swallow
That fills the hollow
Of something missing
Displacing the hunger
With sweet ambrosia.
A breath, a sigh,
A little cry
And warmth surrounds me

His Spirit is here,
And comes inside.
 

mar09

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I like the title. Sometimes it is hard to think about titles!
 

DustyRhodes

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Dec 30, 2016
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I like the title. Sometimes it is hard to think about titles!
thanks for reply...yeah for me not only sometimes but many times it's hard to find a title :D
 
Aug 16, 2016
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I like the brevity of the lines here. Makes it to where each word has a weight to carry and a role to play which IMO they do.