My rest in my Lord

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SunsSunny

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Oct 24, 2016
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Oh the toils in your restful yolk
Never did I need to exasperate myself
Your work is easy and your yolk is light
Under you wings, the restful flight

Delightful toil without anxiety
True work for you never wearies
My labor for you, my immense delight
My love for you, your resplendent light

I thank you for the work of my hands
You invigorate my work without reprimand
I delight in working for you, gracious Master
I annoint you my worthy King with alabaster
 

Rachel20

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May 7, 2013
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This was beautiful to read. Thanks for sharing :)
 

stonesoffire

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Nov 24, 2013
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Oh the toils in your restful yolk
Never did I need to exasperate myself
Your work is easy and your yolk is light
Under you wings, the restful flight

Delightful toil without anxiety
True work for you never wearies
My labor for you, my immense delight
My love for you, your resplendent light

I thank you for the work of my hands
You invigorate my work without reprimand
I delight in working for you, gracious Master
I annoint you my worthy King with alabaster
yoke, not yolk. There's a difference and needs to be changed. Not being nit picky...but its important for your poem.