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Sep 12, 2012
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Truth ©

You weren't what i was looking for,
that smile took me in.
I felt my heart begin to fall,
but I have to pretend

like everything's the same with you.
I can't do this again.
I've wasted love so many times
and don't take time to mend.

I think about you every night,
they're thoughts I can't avert.
I care more than my words could say,
enough to make it hurt.

I wish I'd not made those mistakes,
for whatever its worth.
There's so much I want you to know,
I'm too scared to unearth.

I'm not sure if you'll ever know
the way you make me feel.
Maybe if I wait enough
the feelings wont be real.

That's not what I want though,
still I'm leaving this concealed.
I'm so conflicted wondering
if this should be revealed.
 
Mar 8, 2013
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This is amazing!!! You should definitely make most of this a verse in a song. It's really good.
 
Mar 8, 2013
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Check out the lyric prose I did. 'Cold Goodbyes'
 
Mar 8, 2013
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I think about you every night,
they're thoughts I can't avert.
I care more than my words could say,
enough to make it hurt.

I wish I'd not made those mistakes,
for whatever its worth.
There's so much I want you to know,
That I'm scared to unearth.

This part especially I liked.