inspirational song

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tjogs

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Jun 28, 2009
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Not sure exactly why I got the inspiration for this "song" but thought to share it here. I still feel it's incomplete so feedback and comments much appreciated.

(untitled yet)
You think you’re awake, but are you asleep?
You are sleeping, but are you awake?
Day and night turns into the same twilight.
You remember them when you walk.
They haunt you when you asleep.
And when night draws over you,
you hear their voices again, inside your mind.

You want to wake up but you’re awake.
you want to fall asleep but they’re your dream.
your tracks circle around them.
shadows of you hopes taking their forms.
You build your life around them,
And always they tear it apart.
You see they come to you, inside your mind.

Their promises made you drunk by sweetness,
And the sweetness in you turned to bitterness.
They gave you the sweet honey,
And the honey made you addicted.
You love them and you hate them.
You find no way out and you want to keep them.
You hear they call you again, inside your mind.
 
Feb 28, 2016
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#2
seek Jesus and His healing powers, for they are the only reality that can
bring you into true healing, for this world desires to own you and claim you
as its own...
 

Silverwings

Senior Member
Jul 27, 2016
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#3
Not sure exactly why I got the inspiration for this "song" but thought to share it here. I still feel it's incomplete so feedback and comments much appreciated.

(untitled yet)
You think you’re awake, but are you asleep?
You are sleeping, but are you awake?
Day and night turns into the same twilight.
You remember them when you walk.
They haunt you when you asleep.
And when night draws over you,
you hear their voices again, inside your mind.

You want to wake up but you’re awake.
you want to fall asleep but they’re your dream.
your tracks circle around them.
shadows of you hopes taking their forms.
You build your life around them,
And always they tear it apart.
You see they come to you, inside your mind.

Their promises made you drunk by sweetness,
And the sweetness in you turned to bitterness.
They gave you the sweet honey,
And the honey made you addicted.
You love them and you hate them.
You find no way out and you want to keep them.
You hear they call you again, inside your mind.
It sounds more like a song of warning, rather than inspirational
 

tjogs

Senior Member
Jun 28, 2009
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#4
yeah, I mean I don't know why I had the "inspiration" to write that song, but it really felt important.