Caine's misery

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Church2u2

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Sin, seductive whisper:Cain let me in
I am that thing which you desire
I burn like a flame of fire
Let me in,
Cain frightened :Who are you?
What do you want of me?
Sin, confident:You will break easily,
And ask me to sit at your table,for
I know that you'll kill Able.
Cain,scornfully :
Why bring him into this?Be gone!
Sin evil chuckle:As you wish.
So Able brought his best,
Cain brought what he could wrest,
From the cursed ground
The Creator was pleased with one
Though not two.
Sin sly smile:Cain..attend me now
For didn't He like your brother's cow?
Cain was petulant :It wasn't a cow.
Sin with a shrug:Whatever.
Let me advice you now,
Ask Able to come to this field
And have your revenge trust me
He will yield,
So it happened that Cain slew his brother
And his spilled life cried out
From the ground
It was a mournful sound.
As sad as that of a dove,
And it reached Heaven above.
The Creator marked him
with a flaw that branded
Cain as an out-law.
 
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Church2u2

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Thanks for the likes.
 
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Church2u2

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The ground:Twice cursed! I am already hard
as stone, my soil
Will not yield if you toil
Upon me.
Sin smugly:One man and his father are to blame.
The ground:Was he insane?
Sin:Don't ask me. Here is the man himself,
His name is Caine.
Caine:Be quiet for once,
You were never my friend Sin,
Sin :
It was your choice to give in,
Besides I never said that I was your friend.
Caine moaning:Banished from the face of God!
The ground ;bored:Be that as it may
I certainly can't help you.
Caine:Banished from the face of God!!
Sin:Oh stop your whining and try your luck
In the land of Nod.
 
willfollowsGod

willfollowsGod

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I like it. Only a few corrections it is Cain not Caine, so it should be Cain's misery (sadly in CC you cannot correct a title after it has been used after a certain amount of time). It is Abel not Able. God bless. :)
 
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Church2u2

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willfollowsGod said:
I like it. Only a few corrections it is Cain not Caine, so it should be Cain's misery (sadly in CC you cannot correct a title after it has been used after a certain amount of time). It is Abel not Able. God bless. :)
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Yes I realized my spelling was off after I had written the poems but didn't edit them.Too late now. Thanks for the like.
 
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