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So I wrote a song and I was wondering if I could get opinions on the lyrics... Good honest opinions of course these are the lyrics:
Verse 1:
A song of praise
To honor your name
Only lyrics of worship
Not lyrics for my gain
A song I bring
To please my King
Only lyrics of worship
Not lyrics for my needs
Chorus:
So I'll sing, "Holy, Holy is the Lord"
I follow after you my Savior
You have raised me up
You have shown me love
My Lord
My Lord
Verse 2:
The first time I
First felt new life
Inside my soul
I saw the light
It's still amazing
That gift you gave me
Inside my soul
I know I'm free
Chorus:
And I'll sing, "Holy, Holy is the Lord"
I follow after you my Savior
You have raised me up
You have shown me love
My Lord
My Lord
Every believer knows of your reign
We'll never worship or to another pray
You are beautiful
You work miracles
My Lord
My Lord
Bridge:
Let us all cry out to the Lord
"Jesus, you are wonderful!"
Let every thing that hath breath say
"God, you are my God"
"God, you are my God"
"Oh... You are my... God!!!!"
Chorus:
l'll sing, "Holy, Holy is the Lord"
I follow after you my Savior
You have raised me up
You have shown me love
My Lord
My Lord
Every believer knows of your reign
We'll never worship or to another pray
You are beautiful
You work miracles
My Lord
My Lord
You are beautiful
You work miracles my Lord
My Lord
My Lord
My Lord...
Verse 1:
A song of praise
To honor your name
Only lyrics of worship
Not lyrics for my gain
A song I bring
To please my King
Only lyrics of worship
Not lyrics for my needs
Chorus:
So I'll sing, "Holy, Holy is the Lord"
I follow after you my Savior
You have raised me up
You have shown me love
My Lord
My Lord
Verse 2:
The first time I
First felt new life
Inside my soul
I saw the light
It's still amazing
That gift you gave me
Inside my soul
I know I'm free
Chorus:
And I'll sing, "Holy, Holy is the Lord"
I follow after you my Savior
You have raised me up
You have shown me love
My Lord
My Lord
Every believer knows of your reign
We'll never worship or to another pray
You are beautiful
You work miracles
My Lord
My Lord
Bridge:
Let us all cry out to the Lord
"Jesus, you are wonderful!"
Let every thing that hath breath say
"God, you are my God"
"God, you are my God"
"Oh... You are my... God!!!!"
Chorus:
l'll sing, "Holy, Holy is the Lord"
I follow after you my Savior
You have raised me up
You have shown me love
My Lord
My Lord
Every believer knows of your reign
We'll never worship or to another pray
You are beautiful
You work miracles
My Lord
My Lord
You are beautiful
You work miracles my Lord
My Lord
My Lord
My Lord...