Master Remove the Cord and Break the Golden bowl
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I like the poem very much!
But I think the video could be improved in some ways. (Hardly surprising because this is your first poetry video, unless I'm mistaken.) The biggest thing is that the music is too loud in comparison to the reader's voice. It's hard to hear the words. So adjusting the music volume would help a lot.
There's also some inconsistency in font settings (some parts don't have the font in bold).
White text against partially white background makes it harder to read. I don't know if your software has the option of adding a drop shadow or a darker border. That would do alot to add readability, because otherwise I do like the white font.
But I think the video could be improved in some ways. (Hardly surprising because this is your first poetry video, unless I'm mistaken.) The biggest thing is that the music is too loud in comparison to the reader's voice. It's hard to hear the words. So adjusting the music volume would help a lot.
There's also some inconsistency in font settings (some parts don't have the font in bold).
White text against partially white background makes it harder to read. I don't know if your software has the option of adding a drop shadow or a darker border. That would do alot to add readability, because otherwise I do like the white font.
