School in the eyes of a lonely teen boy

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imepaula

Guest
#1
This is a story/poem i wrote. The reason it doesn't rhyme is it is in free verse ( no rhyming). This came to me. I don't know who this kid is maybe he's one of you. But I felt like writing this and hope you are blessed :)

As he walks down the hall
he hears kids laugh
He knows they are laughing at him
He tries to be friendly and make jokes
But everyone tells him to shut up
The one girl he really likes makes fun of him
Now he feels worthless
He wants nothing more but to end his life.
He goes through class knowing everyone hates him
He sits at the lunch table with many people
He makes jokes and tries to be funny
Everyone is laughing but not at his jokes, but at him.
When he gets home, he decides he's going to kill himself
while looking for the gun, he finds his dad's beer bottles
he opens one up and drinks it down
he feels the pain leaving
he feels the problems go away
so while everyone is gone he drinks
he keeps this up every day
he now has to lie and make excuses just to get a drink
now the drinks have no affect
he feels the pain come back
he goes and finds his dads gun
he is just about to pull the trigger when he hears a call
one of the seniors invites him to church
he comes one night and enjoys it
so he starts going every wednesday night
one night he decides he's going to talk to the youth pastor
he tell the youth pastor about his problems
the youth pastor tells him if the whole world hated him
one person would still love him
he loved him so much
he died on a cross for him
the boy asks how he can get to know this man
the youth pastor tells him his name is Jesus
he can know him by giving his life to him
he told him to follow him in a prayer
the youth pastor said repeat after me
"Jesus I'm lost
I want to know you better
I love you
I'm sorry for everything I've ever done
Thank you for dieing on the cross for me
I believe in my heart
that you died on the cross
and in 3 days you rose again
I give you my alcoholism
I give you my depression
I give you my loneliness
please take it
I know i can't do this on my own
Amen"
The boy opened his eyes and felt different
He went to school
the people making fun of him
didn't bother him as much
eventually he began to make friends
 
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godschild

Guest
#2
i like that i kind of fell the same way that boy felt because i was always getting picked on by kids and teachers but i knew that i could get through the day with Gods help and luckly i did have 1 teacher that was a christian so i knew i could talk to her about anything.
 
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imepaula

Guest
#3
I'm glad you could relate
 
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counrtygurrl

Guest
#4
wow..... nice..... that was really good... i wright poems also :)
 
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Fisheth

Guest
#5
I've never felt like this, but I like what you have written.