Hope E. Ternal and the Nightmares of Pain.
As the morning sunrise shines, across the heavens the mighty angel Hope rides her faithful steed Bluefire. The rising of the mountain dewdrops glisten as she rides to yet another encounter with the demonic nightmares of pain. Running along side her is a very powerful leopard named Brighteyes.
The stiring of anguish can be seen in the slumber of a old man as envisioned nightmares of pain creep into his subconcious and conscious. The demonic horde begins to attack, ripping and viciously biting at his heels as he runs for cover in the midnight air. From the western highlands a flash of blueflame surrounds the night sky as a mighty cat's roar is heard in the distance.
Hope, sit upon her saddle quickly grabs her duelwield pistols, loaded with holy salt rounds. As she begins blasting the demonic horde "You will not have this man's soul this night, back into the abyss you demons of darkness!" her fearsome battlecry bellows. As the fight insues Bluefire is stomping with his hoofs, as Brighteyes claws through the horde with a righteous hiss. Running for his life, the man collapses from fear and exhaustion. As the graven demon comes in for a killing blow, Hope springs from her saddle flying high into the cold sky. Incased in a blinding white flame, she cries "Justice!" Her hands gripping tightly to her pistols she lets loose 18 shots from each gun fireing 36 shots into the creature. As she lands atop the demon she springs backward uppercutting the demon with her pistols.
The broken silouttee of the creature disappears as quickly as it appeared. The remaining nightmares are either defeated or scattered due to the massacre of their commander. As Hope drapes the broken body of the old man acroos her mount a mighty thunder cloud can be heard as the heavenly rain begins to desend. Heavy drops hitting all around them quickly heals Bluefire, Brighteyes, Hope, and the old man instantly refreshing them from all hunger, anger, malice, and fear. The rain of redemption completely restores them as they race off into the northern sky.
Hope E. Ternal and the Unseen Death.
Rising from the depth of the abyss, a ghostly shape slowly assends from a icey river, floating high in the basin clouds of a small mountian town. The townsfolk lay slepping in their beds as the creature approaches. Blackish flames that resemble death, decay, and disease slowly desend toward the residents. Unknown to them the creature begins summoning more, and more blackish flame orbs.
Deep in the heart of the mountain a mighty earthquake is heard, a horned beast begins to take shape, as the blackish flame orbs begin feeding it's shadow. Raceing across the clouds in the western sky, a blueflame burning hotter than hell itself can be seen. "Rawr!" Brighteye's growl can be heard as she desends from the heavens clawing and biting the ghostly shape. The ghostly shape quickly takes a defensive stance as it tries to parry her rapid claws of furry.
Hope atop Bluefire, desends upon the horned beast. Hope reaches for her left handed pistol, upon the crome handle "Redemption" is clearly seen. She lets off a few salt rounds, sizeing up the huge horned beast. With one powerful lunge the beast sends Hope sprawling backward off Bluefire. Blue flames quickly immerse the valley as Bluefire begins bucking wildly at the horned beast. As she reaches for her righthanded pistol, upon the crome handle "Peacemaker" is legible. Incased in white flame, Hope quickly and maliously attacks the beast sending salt rounds into its torso. The beast's wounds begin to smoke wildly as the salt burns the unholy monster's skin.
Brighteyes quickly dispatches the strange ghostly shape, who was no match for the leopard's stealth and agilty. As the creature simply vanishing after her deathblow, Brighteyes quickly runs at full speed to Bluefire's side.
The Horned menance breathes red fire upon all three heroes burning and singeing them very badly. Hope, Brighteyes, and Bluefire now hurt press on knowing if they can not dispatch this beast many innocent lives will be destroyed. With a desperate plea for help and guidence, a blue flame from Bluefire's aura quickly rises in the sky. As clouds begin to get heavy with rain, lightining desends from the heavens with a loud clash. The holy rain begins to fall burning the horned beast and healing the three heroes. As the beast screams in agony "The holiness of heaven itself will bring you too your kness demon." echoes Hope as she delievers a death blow. The beast disappears and the flames die down as the stillness of calm sets in over the valley.
These are two very short stories i just wrote what do you think?
As the morning sunrise shines, across the heavens the mighty angel Hope rides her faithful steed Bluefire. The rising of the mountain dewdrops glisten as she rides to yet another encounter with the demonic nightmares of pain. Running along side her is a very powerful leopard named Brighteyes.
The stiring of anguish can be seen in the slumber of a old man as envisioned nightmares of pain creep into his subconcious and conscious. The demonic horde begins to attack, ripping and viciously biting at his heels as he runs for cover in the midnight air. From the western highlands a flash of blueflame surrounds the night sky as a mighty cat's roar is heard in the distance.
Hope, sit upon her saddle quickly grabs her duelwield pistols, loaded with holy salt rounds. As she begins blasting the demonic horde "You will not have this man's soul this night, back into the abyss you demons of darkness!" her fearsome battlecry bellows. As the fight insues Bluefire is stomping with his hoofs, as Brighteyes claws through the horde with a righteous hiss. Running for his life, the man collapses from fear and exhaustion. As the graven demon comes in for a killing blow, Hope springs from her saddle flying high into the cold sky. Incased in a blinding white flame, she cries "Justice!" Her hands gripping tightly to her pistols she lets loose 18 shots from each gun fireing 36 shots into the creature. As she lands atop the demon she springs backward uppercutting the demon with her pistols.
The broken silouttee of the creature disappears as quickly as it appeared. The remaining nightmares are either defeated or scattered due to the massacre of their commander. As Hope drapes the broken body of the old man acroos her mount a mighty thunder cloud can be heard as the heavenly rain begins to desend. Heavy drops hitting all around them quickly heals Bluefire, Brighteyes, Hope, and the old man instantly refreshing them from all hunger, anger, malice, and fear. The rain of redemption completely restores them as they race off into the northern sky.
Hope E. Ternal and the Unseen Death.
Rising from the depth of the abyss, a ghostly shape slowly assends from a icey river, floating high in the basin clouds of a small mountian town. The townsfolk lay slepping in their beds as the creature approaches. Blackish flames that resemble death, decay, and disease slowly desend toward the residents. Unknown to them the creature begins summoning more, and more blackish flame orbs.
Deep in the heart of the mountain a mighty earthquake is heard, a horned beast begins to take shape, as the blackish flame orbs begin feeding it's shadow. Raceing across the clouds in the western sky, a blueflame burning hotter than hell itself can be seen. "Rawr!" Brighteye's growl can be heard as she desends from the heavens clawing and biting the ghostly shape. The ghostly shape quickly takes a defensive stance as it tries to parry her rapid claws of furry.
Hope atop Bluefire, desends upon the horned beast. Hope reaches for her left handed pistol, upon the crome handle "Redemption" is clearly seen. She lets off a few salt rounds, sizeing up the huge horned beast. With one powerful lunge the beast sends Hope sprawling backward off Bluefire. Blue flames quickly immerse the valley as Bluefire begins bucking wildly at the horned beast. As she reaches for her righthanded pistol, upon the crome handle "Peacemaker" is legible. Incased in white flame, Hope quickly and maliously attacks the beast sending salt rounds into its torso. The beast's wounds begin to smoke wildly as the salt burns the unholy monster's skin.
Brighteyes quickly dispatches the strange ghostly shape, who was no match for the leopard's stealth and agilty. As the creature simply vanishing after her deathblow, Brighteyes quickly runs at full speed to Bluefire's side.
The Horned menance breathes red fire upon all three heroes burning and singeing them very badly. Hope, Brighteyes, and Bluefire now hurt press on knowing if they can not dispatch this beast many innocent lives will be destroyed. With a desperate plea for help and guidence, a blue flame from Bluefire's aura quickly rises in the sky. As clouds begin to get heavy with rain, lightining desends from the heavens with a loud clash. The holy rain begins to fall burning the horned beast and healing the three heroes. As the beast screams in agony "The holiness of heaven itself will bring you too your kness demon." echoes Hope as she delievers a death blow. The beast disappears and the flames die down as the stillness of calm sets in over the valley.
These are two very short stories i just wrote what do you think?