Sinner's cry against Sin

[Bryancampbell]

Sin! A name that drives demons abroad!
Sin! Deceives millions to applaud!
Sin! Revenge on a profit that don't repay!
Sin! Injecting poison before the break of day!
Don't look into her eyes
That hypnotize
The flies of guys
That swarm on her lies!
Sin! It clogs the veins of your heart!
Sin! Tears personal relationships apart!
Sin! Creates masses of stars that twinkle at night!
Sin! Drags you further from the light!
Her swift feet
Crosses the street
To only meet
You in defeat!
Sinners! Find your rope to the nearest exit!
Sinners! Copy and paste you cannot edit!
Sinners! Drain yourself from this addictive drug!
Sinners! It latches on you like a parasitic bug!
Sin! Sin! Sin!
For her to date
Is a gate to her fate
That's worse than bait!
Sin! You climb higher than the Everest Mountain!
Sin! You dry up the fake everlasting water fountain!
Sin! Cutting down every living tree!
Sin! Keeps captives from being free!
Jesus! Our Lord and Saviour!
Yeshua! The Salt's only flavor!
Christ! Our advocate at court!
Messiah! Our rock, Our mighty fort!

 

[meera]

Your poem is really cool.

 

[Bryancampbell]

Thanks I think it could have been better but oh well I enjoyed it!!!!!!

 

[bluebirdchaser]

Wow, powerful stuff here. You definitely capture the feeling of just being broken and pushed down with every "sin!". I really like how you used the different names for Christ too. Uplifting. Great job!