YOU'VE BEEN SENTENCED .....

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WineRose

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...the fact that her boyfriend was cheating on her as well. And how the heck she teleported hundreds of miles from her home overnight. The hiking guide handed her a newspaper. She sees the big headline of the front page about an otaku in Israel dying from a lightning strike near a temple after praying, and who is rumoured to have seen a certain demon wearing a rather stylish tuxedo on multiple occasions. She then quickly skims through the rest of it and puts it away in her pocket. Suddenly, something drops in front of them...
 

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..low and behold its a time machine! "No way," says the guide. Marissa slowly examines it and sees it is on, so without thinking , she just pushes the bright fluorescent button and - POOF! They are in a field with Dinosaurs making odd sounds in the distant. The dude is now speechless, even the Gorillas are speechless, and show signs of concern, Then Jesus shows up as a light and says," Ok, you guys need more direct servicing in way of my love so Come to Me.....................................they are all unsure what He means exactly so they are stunned and afraid waiting for Him talk and explain............God is walking away as the area darkens once again where they are standing, and only because there are large creators coming toward them from behind, do they immediately travel towards God's direction.....................................................Then God says, "Thank you for coming to Me, now let's go home I have some things to talk to you all about. ~THE END~ (Wow, .....Smile. Feel free to start your own now and enjoy....)...
 
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Galatea

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Hey, what about doing only one sentence each? It might make it more varied.
 
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Galatea

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...he said feel free to start the next one...
 

slave

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Finished~ {Story 2} ~ "Marissa's Mania"~

The time came when Marissa was about to take her IB Math Exams. As she enters the exam room, she silently prays to God for her to do well. However, she has spent the whole week hanging out with her boyfriend and updating her social media status. The next week she got her results back. They were positive, And I don't mean about the math quiz either. That's right she was pregnant.

She was floored. What, now? Would she tell her mother and (real) boyfriend, being he is overseas at war right now? :rolleyes: She paused and thought she could come to her mother with anything as her mother loves her unconditionally and will not condemn her, although she would be disappointed with her.

So she marshalled all her courage and asked her mother if they could have a conversation her mother saying, "sure, I actually had to talk to YOU about your test scores anyway, your teacher called and said, "You scored lower than anyone whose ever taken a test in that class. Even though I love you, I'm very disappointed. Now what did you want to talk about?" Marissa did not know how to break the news, so she blurted out, "Mom, I am pregnant! So, she told her mother about everything.

It took a lot of strength and bravery to tell her Mom everything, but now, unfortunately, this means that she has to skip the rest of 'Exam Month'. She so needed her Mom's encouragement.

Surprised about her mother's reaction, she retreated back to her room and thought about her boyfriend overseas; She told him she had been seeing someone else and was now pregnant. He said that was actually fine with him as he was already cheating with a girl soldier they call "The Desert Eagle."

Marissa quickly hung up and felt miserable about everything: Her pregnancy, her boyfriend, and all of those crucial exams that she has to skip. What would her other classmates think of her when they find out?! She collapsed on her bed and prayed to God that her baby will be safe and well and that she will find a way to take care of him. Although it was not the best time, she could not help being overwhelmed with awe that a baby was growing inside her, her baby to love. She knew prenatal care is important, so she decided to tell her mother straightaway.
On her first absent day of the exams, due to her pregnancy, Marissa suddenly woke up in the middle of a foreign city. She had absolutely no idea why, and was really panicking. For some reason, all she had with her was her Bible and herhot pink kitchen knife. Still bewildered by what just happened, she picked up the Bible and the knife, stood up and first wandered into a forest called the 'Santa Elena Cloud Forest Reserve.'

This place is beautiful, she thought. Her friend had told her it is known as a terrain of cloud forest, something she could use right now, (being on another cloud). She saw a lush garden of mosses, ferns, flowers and epiphytes on literally every tree. With the clouds drifting really low, it was beautiful and scary at the same time, kind of like Marissa's life right now.

While she walked with the hiking guide and a few trained Gorillas close by, she began to think about
the fact that her boyfriend was cheating on her as well. And how it was she teleported hundreds of miles from her home overnight. The hiking guide handed her a newspaper. She sees the big headline on the front page about an 'otaku' ( a person who is obsessed with computers) in Israel dying from a lightning strike near a temple after praying, and who is rumoured to have seen a certain demon wearing a rather stylish tuxedo on multiple occasions.

She then quickly skims through the rest of it and puts it away in her pocket. Suddenly, something drops in front of them. L
ow and behold, its a 'Time Machine'! "No way," says the guide. Marissa slowly examines it and sees it is on, so without thinking , she just pushes the bright fluorescent button and - POOF! They are in a field with Dinosaurs making odd sounds in the distant. The dude is now speechless, even the Gorillas are speechless, and show signs of concern, Then Jesus shows up as a light and says," Ok, you guys need more direct servicing in way of my love so Come to Me.....>.................>...............they are all unsure what He means exactly so they are stunned and afraid waiting for Him to talk and explain Himself............God is walking away as the area darkens once again where they are standing, and only because there are large creators coming toward them from behind, do they immediately travel towards God's direction.........>.............>..................Then God says, "Thank you for coming to Me, now let's go home I have some things to talk to you all about.

~THE END~ (Wow, .....Smile. Feel free to start your own now and enjoy....) ......
:)......Marissa really liked talking to her Mother a lot! Smile...
 
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slave

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Hey, what about doing only one sentence each? It might make it more varied.
Sure, let's try that...if someone adds more we can be loving and guide them otherwise but sure.....OK ONE SENTENCE EACH - Thx Galatea I like the suggestion. (NEW RULE ALERTY!).....The British are coming,.... wait what?,

No just "Only one sentence each now. If you double-up on turns, I really don't care, but it will give a chance for more options this way. Stay clean, and stay understandable to the ongoing story.......(Pre-read the story before heading into the next sentence, in other words). Ok, let's enjoy a new version now to "YOU'VE BEEN SENTENCED."
 

slave

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Who would like to start?.....Go ahead....>
 

slave

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...In the loveliest town of all, where the houses were white and high and the elms trees were green and higher than the houses, where the front yards were wide and pleasant and the back yards were bushy and worth finding out about, where the streets sloped down to the stream and the stream flowed quietly under the bridge, where the lawns ended in orchards and the orchards ended in fields and the fields ended in pastures and the pastures climbed the hill and disappeared over the top toward the wonderful wide sky, in this loveliest of all towns Stuart stopped to get a drink of water and... ...(how's that for one sentence? Smile)
 
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Galatea

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Nice Hawthorne-like sentence.

... saw a funny, round gnome dressed in yellow and green, holding a bunch of daisies and pacing around the water pump, waiting for someone...
 

slave

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...apparently to help in getting water for itself at the well, in the back yard of one of the white houses Stuart and the gnome (Stuart affectionally called: 'Shorty-Pants') had crossed paths at to ....
 
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Galatea

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...collectively find the princess in the tower of Paranoia and free her from her self imposed prison, as Shorty Pants knew the rescuer would be a man who would draw water for him from the well (reminiscent of Rebecca)...
 

slave

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Fully aware of the fact the human could not Know of this inner struggle, Shorty Pants began to blurt out, while Stuart drew from the well,......
 
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Fully aware of the fact the human could not Know of this inner struggle, Shorty Pants began to blurt out...
"Hey, Bud- I need you to draw this water from the well, otherwise my daisies will wilt, and I need them for my wife" (because he thought he should trick Stuart into the quest)...
 

slave

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..Stuart, having been thinking boldly in his consciousness he had already gone forward in the task of water drawing, snapped out of his mindset reel, and listened to the little imp gnome, and reset his attitude toward serving Mr.Pants by retrieving purposeful 'Wife Water'; immediately the jr. imp began to become more assertive and ... ...(did you notice how I got us out of that mess? Smile)....
 
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slave

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UPDATE: ........Story (3):


Once upon a time in the loveliest town of all, where the houses were white and high and the elm trees were green and higher than the houses, where the front yards were wide and pleasant and the back yards were bushy and worth finding out about, where the streets sloped down to the stream and the stream flowed quietly under the bridge, where the lawns ended in orchards and the orchards ended in fields and the fields ended in pastures and the pastures climbed the hill and disappeared over the top toward the wonderful wide sky, in this loveliest of all towns Stuart stopped to get a drink of water and saw a funny, round gnome dressed in yellow and green, holding a bunch of daisies and pacing around the water pump, waiting for someone, apparently, to help in getting water for itself at the well, in the back yard of one of the white houses Stuart and the gnome (Stuart affectionally called: 'Shorty-Pants') had crossed paths at.

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collectively find the princess in the tower of Paranoia and free her from her self imposed prison, as Shorty Pants knew the rescuer would be a man who would draw water for him from the well (reminiscent of Rebecca). Fully aware of the fact the human could not Know of this inner struggle, Shorty Pants began to blurt out, while Stuart drew from the well,"Hey, Bud- I need you to draw this water from the well, otherwise my daisies will wilt, and I need them for my wife" (because he thought he should trick Stuart into the quest).

Stuart, having been thinking boldly in his consciousness he had already gone forward in the task of water drawing, snapped out of his mindset reel, and listened to the little imp gnome, and reset his attitude toward serving Mr.Pants by retrieving purposeful 'Wife Water'; immediately the jr. imp began to become more assertive and ...
...(ok, add on from here...)