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Rachel20

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Of all the things that weigh my soul down
To despair and wonder, to cry and frown
With the end of one, there is yet another
But when I look back as I get further
As I cross through life, season by season
I do not feel prepared to seemingly ease in
But what looked insurmountable and heavy
Now appears feather light, I was happy
In old pictures when I believed I was breaking
It was nothing then, I was only growing
This time should fly by, I await the future me
She whispers, you will lift this easily

 

Crimson_Lark

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Rachael, this is really, really good. Uncommonly good, thanks for posting this! Now I'm off to read all your other works. lol
 

Rachel20

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Crimson_Lark;bt23021 said:
Rachael, this is really, really good. Uncommonly good, thanks for posting this! Now I'm off to read all your other works. lol
Thank you so much for reading it Crimson! I am so pleased you would think that!

I have a few on my blog here but most on the poetry forum :)