anger managemunt

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eminemjrxx

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look guys i aint into all this poems stuf but i hav to rite one for my anger managemunt homework so pls tell me if it ok...i hav no fear,madman screming in my ear,i am the wanted devils spear,deth in blood and blood in teers,still demons scared wen i apeer,shoutin in the nite to cry tonite,make me feel like its alrite,make it beter wit all ur mite,wher r u wen i call for rite,u closed the doors but i still try,at least give me a resun y,u lied to me so feel ur pain,admit that u made the mistake,hawnt my life but leve the prize,tortue me and il kill u twice,do it agen and il make ur sin,third time meens u fall in frite,one mor time i lern to fly,one mor time i lose my mind,one mor time and then all die
 
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overcomer2

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Well, I like how it has a beat, and it seems to rhyme. I don't care for the some of the words, they make me feel sad. Ex. one more time I lose my mind. When you lose your mind that means Satan is in control. So, those are my thoughts. Try one that shows how once anger management is achieved how you will feel.

like: Now that I'm Sane, And I know he took the Blame, I am free from the serpent who kept me in shame.
 
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eminemjrxx said:
look guys i aint into all this poems stuf but i hav to rite one for my anger managemunt homework so pls tell me if it ok...i hav no fear,madman screming in my ear,i am the wanted devils spear,deth in blood and blood in teers,still demons scared wen i apeer,shoutin in the nite to cry tonite,make me feel like its alrite,make it beter wit all ur mite,wher r u wen i call for rite,u closed the doors but i still try,at least give me a resun y,u lied to me so feel ur pain,admit that u made the mistake,hawnt my life but leve the prize,tortue me and il kill u twice,do it agen and il make ur sin,third time meens u fall in frite,one mor time i lern to fly,one mor time i lose my mind,one mor time and then all die
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I suppose the anger mgmnt team highly approved of your rite,

Ther's gonna be da Man comin to da Game
He ain't playin video, He ain't playin th same.
Chekin for Blood on the thought dome
Chekin da see who He takes Home
 
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eminemjrxx

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crossnote said:
I suppose the anger mgmnt team highly approved of your rite,Ther's gonna be da Man comin to da GameHe ain't playin video, He ain't playin th same.Chekin for Blood on the thought domeChekin da see who He takes Home
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i dont get it r u tryna take the piss or wot
 
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crossnote said:
I suppose the anger mgmnt team highly approved of your rite,

Ther's gonna be da Man comin to da Game
He ain't playin video, He ain't playin th same.
Chekin for Blood on the thought dome
Chekin da see who He takes Home
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Let me interpret.

Jesus is coming back to this world
He is not playing games, His ways are not ours.
Only those who are covered by His blood
will He take home with Him.
 
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eminemjrxx

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wot do u meen coverd in his blood? like from wen he was on the cross or wot?
 
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eminemjrxx said:
look guys i aint into all this poems stuf but i hav to rite one for my anger managemunt homework so pls tell me if it ok...i hav no fear,madman screming in my ear,i am the wanted devils spear,deth in blood and blood in teers,still demons scared wen i apeer,shoutin in the nite to cry tonite,make me feel like its alrite,make it beter wit all ur mite,wher r u wen i call for rite,u closed the doors but i still try,at least give me a resun y,u lied to me so feel ur pain,admit that u made the mistake,hawnt my life but leve the prize,tortue me and il kill u twice,do it agen and il make ur sin,third time meens u fall in frite,one mor time i lern to fly,one mor time i lose my mind,one mor time and then all die
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On your rhyme
I find it fine
but your spelling and grammer
deserves a big hammer!
 
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eminemjrxx

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RickyZ said:
On your rhymeI find it finebut your spelling and grammerdeserves a big hammer!
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lol sorry bout the spelling i aint good at it
 
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eminemjrxx

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yea well im on my ds and i dont think its has spell check on it
 
RickyZ

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Well that's out of whack
Must be an old Mac
 
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eminemjrxx

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lmao do u ryme evaryfing bro
 
RickyZ

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It's not my normal way
but you got me going today!
 
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eminemjrxx

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lol ur awesum :)
 
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eminemjrxx said:
wot do u meen coverd in his blood? like from wen he was on the cross or wot?
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Yes, from the cross, His death means our life.

Revelation 1:5 And from Jesus Christ, who is the faithful witness, and the first begotten of the dead, and the prince of the kings of the earth. Unto him that loved us, and washed us from our sins in his own blood,
 
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eminemjrxx

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You say you ain't a good speller but you sure spelled the rapper's name perfectly. Maybe it's a case of selective spelling Ace.
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Wel obviosly im gona spell his name rite i listen to him loads and his names spelt how u sey it
 
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back in tha day we did say M&M
 
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