Dracula is Dead

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One night Mr. Leary gave to me his psyche treat
til my mind was swarming beneath my feet
discognizance ruled through coggy wheels
pain with every turn
An image on the mantle
a crucifixion going on before my eyes.
Dracula couldn't look not even for a sec
the cogs sharpened multiplied increasing the pain
lightning bolts rammed my skull.

WHY?
Why couldn't I?
Look? Look. Look!
Why not, why, why not?
A look...a real look,
don't turn your head
LIFE emanating from the hanging man
see that wasn't that bad.
Thrown to the past...an 8yr. old hobo
Further still, the heaves the upheaval the pushing
all is white, hospital white, the pushing intensifies
until I see and hear...a baby....born anew
A new peace,
Dracula is dead.
 
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let me just add that this describes the core events of my conversion many years ago....not a typical Romans Road convert.
 
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I have to say I'm very inspired by your poetry! I'm very interested in digging deeper. May I have an analysis of this one? :D
 
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