In respect to grammar mistakes:
"aw and awe are different.. grammar police, and you both are ticketed! "
(1) every sentence should start with a capital letter.
(2) You should have used three dots not two dots after "different"
"not really. I have horrible grammar bc i don't care if its not a formal paper"
(1) "not really" has no subject or verb and thus is not a sentence.
(2) bc - What does this mean? Do you mean B.C. as in the time period before Christ?
(3) "I" should always be capitalized: even i know that much!
(4) "its" should be it's: its always important to see if you can put the two words "it is" in the place in the sentence!
(5) You should have a period after paper at the end of the sentence
don't expect to win the prise if you don't have better gramar than all of that
Reminds me of something I read (in Norwegian) about grammatical rules
- Prepositions are words never to start sentences with
- Avoid cliches like the plague
- Do not use abbreviations etc.
- Do not use commas, any more than you need to
- Don't use too many exclamation marks!
- One should never generalize
- Be more or less precise
- No fragmented sentences
- Who needs rhetorical questions?
- Use a spel check to avoid errors
- Read through the text to if words are missing
- Make sure that you always finish what you