My first poem

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Holgybogly

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Apr 29, 2020
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I see you in the soil
i see you in my shed
so I go back to bed
and then it’s when it begins

in the water
in the bath
I can hear you
and then it’s when it begins

I wish that you would stop
but it just seems to drop
as I sit on the air
and then it’s when it begins

loud or quiet
big or small
I know itll happen
and then it’s when it begins
 
Lafftur

Lafftur

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Holgybogly said:
I see you in the soil
i see you in my shed
so I go back to bed
and then it’s when it begins

in the water
in the bath
I can hear you
and then it’s when it begins

I wish that you would stop
but it just seems to drop
as I sit on the air
and then it’s when it begins

loud or quiet
big or small
I know it'll happen
and then it’s when it begins
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Hello Holgybogly, :love:

Thank you for sharing your first poem with all of us! A "First Poem" is kind of "when it begins".......:giggle:

I will share with you what I see in your poem....:unsure::love:(y)

Holgybogly said:
I see you in the soil
i see you in my shed
so I go back to bed
and then it’s when it begins
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To see is to understand.....we understand the "Seed of Christ" is in the soil of our heart.

We understand God is the Gardner in our shed.

We go back to bed because we enter the 'Sabbath Rest' which is putting our faith in the finished "work of Christ" for us.

Being IN CHRIST is "when it begins." Our new life begins......

Holgybogly said:
in the water
in the bath
I can hear you
and then it’s when it begins
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In the water, in the bath is water baptism as a work of faith; also, receiving the baptism of the Holy Spirit is the opening of our ears.......we now have an ear to hear what the Spirit is saying in the scriptures.

Hearing the voice of God is "when it begins." Our new relationship with God begins.....

Holgybogly said:
I wish that you would stop
but it just seems to drop
as I sit on the air
and then it’s when it begins
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Our "flesh" resists God and wants its own way - our flesh is always wishing God would stop.

But, God doesn't listen to or answer the cries of our flesh, the cries just drop.

As we sit on the air, our spirits are seated with Christ in Heavenly places and we experience a different perspective - we can see things the way God sees them.

Being able to see things the way God sees them is "when it begins." Our new understanding and place of authority with Christ in Heavenly places.....

Holgybogly said:
loud or quiet
big or small
I know it'll happen
and then it’s when it begins
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Loud or quiet, big or small - how ever God wants to do what He does, we are in agreement with Him.

We have come to understand that God's Will is going to be done - all things will happen just as He said it would.

Understanding, knowing, loving and embracing God's Will for our lives is "when it begins." One with God in Spirit, Mind, Soul and Body....on the Earth as it is in Heaven.

Absolutely LOVED your First Poem of Many to Come! :love:(y)
 
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