WHAT DO YOU WANT?

[resurrection33]

They said I should go into greater depth with my characters. I don't tell the reader enough about them.

 

[MrHonest]

Hmmmm if it were me that was told that I'd write one about 1 character. Sort of like Catcher in the rye. For practice. What're you planning next Ress?

 

[wwjd_kilden]

I love that book.

I end up over- focusing on character, telling lots about everyone and making the stories looong

 

[MrHonest]

Definitely I thought it was a great book too.. I think, did you read East of Eden??

 

[wwjd_kilden]

I don't think so (I can't remember it if I did).

 

[MrHonest]

Its a good story, a long story but it has some great characters.

 

[resurrection33]

Hmmmm if it were me that was told that I'd write one about 1 character. Sort of like Catcher in the rye. For practice. What're you planning next Ress?

I've started a book about a little league baseball team from a poor neighborhood.

 

[MrHonest]

Cool that reminds me of that movie.... uhhhh I can't remember

 

[resurrection33]

I don't see many movies.

 

[MrHonest]

The Sandlot. What do you usually watch on the telly?

 

[resurrection33]

Judge Judy, News, This Old House, Ask This Old House, Leave it to Beaver, Hazel, Laurel and Hardy, golf, football, Alfred Hitchcock, Stargate SG-1, America's Test Kitchen (Cook's Country,) and a few others.

 

[MrHonest]

Ah okay that all sounds familiar except for the older tv shows. I'll watch most of that stuff though I don't really watch tv anymore but the last thing I was watching was Criminal Minds, Law and Order, and Psych.

 

[resurrection33]

Ah okay that all sounds familiar except for the older tv shows. I'll watch most of that stuff though I don't really watch tv anymore but the last thing I was watching was Criminal Minds, Law and Order, and Psych.

I like "classic" TV.

 

[MrHonest]

I like smart tv shows. I also saw a hint of faith in Criminal Minds: whenever the FBI would get asked if they believe in God they would be like: You can't say there isn't a God. Definitely. I'd pray and ask for an answer for that.

 

[resurrection33]

Some of those criminal shows are pretty good. I have to go to bed early, and I don't have cable or satellite TV, so I am not completely up-to-date on what the good modern TV shows are.

 

[MrHonest]

Im not up to date either the shows I mentioned have been runnin for years

 

[christiancollegegirl]

I want to go out for breakfast.

 

[MrHonest]

I want to know how to pick the sweet fruits from the store because I bought a slightly sweet watermelon & some bitter oranges

 

[wwjd_kilden]

put sugar cubes in the oranges and then munch on them

 

[christiancollegegirl]

This winter was too mild, so the fruit isnt as sweet as it usually is.