Lovesong Poetry

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Siberian_Khatru

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Keep it up, Lovesong. I'm reading, just been busy, so I haven't invested much time into the forums.
 
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Wolf

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Keep it up, Lovesong. I'm reading, just been busy, so I haven't invested much time into the forums.
Lies all lies~ j/k lol

Its all good, I understand, thanks for letting me know though. :D
 

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Siberian_Khatru

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Haha, I remember this!
 

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Remember what?

Maybe you should answer the door.
 
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Wolf

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This song sounds exactly like my thoughts..

"All The Love In The World"
Lyrics by: Nine Inch Nails
nine inch nails- all the love in the world. lyrics - YouTube


Watching all the insects march along
Seem to know just right where they belong
Smears of face reflecting in the chrome
Hiding in the crowd I'm all alone

No one's heard a single word I've said..
They don't sound as good outside my head
It looks as though the past is here to stay
I've become a million miles a...

Why do you get all the love in the world?

All the jagged edges disappear
Colors all look brighter when you're near
The stars are all afire in the sky
Sometimes I get so lonely I could...

Why do you get all the love in the world?
Why do you get all the love?
 
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Wolf

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The Garden and the Planner

There is a garden so far and wide;
where the most exotic and beautiful reside;
There is a flower called love she's withering away;
the gardener works hard to preserve it from its decay.
There is an exotic rare bird trapped within a cage;
selfish, longing for the simple life, it stayed.
well trained by the jailers with fear and manipulation;
the bird began to realize she was trapped in situation.
No worries, the bird cage door has always been left open.
One dark night, the bird decides to fly out in the open.
-end-
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Love,

You laid down your life just to show me
that you cared about my life, you loved me,
and you made me see that I was worth something, and that it was
okay to be free. I'm always going to be grateful.
that makes me really, really want to try to live,
even though life itself is not promised...I want to try for you.

So I am making plans for my own life, to be on my own,
I need to make some sort of future foundation if I am going to 'live'.
I can't stay in the state I'm in because Its destroying my life,
Its not really helping you either that you are worrying about me all the time.
Its hurting your life a lot too. You should know you are loved, you just
don't want to accept that fact.

So I'll leave that door open for you to move on if you want to.
I know you can't wait forever, and I don't want you to suffer because of me anymore.
I want to be with you, but I honestly think you don't want to be with me..
you never gave me a straight answer, actually you never answered me...
I have a feeling you never will, except for the only answers you can give..
which aren't answers at all except to keep me happy.

Love is real, you proved to me that,
Anyway, love will always be burned in my heart forever
its worth 'Falling' for, so I am walking a new step...
I'll make my way.

anyway thankyou..
 
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Wolf

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Welcome To No Return
Story by: Lowanla (me)

Spray painted in dark black graffiti,
The stop sign says, "No Return" at the end of the avenue.
Echoes from the past fade. "turn back, turn back."
Tune them out with humming, I still feel nothing.
The fear alone petrifies my legs still,
yet one thing alone draws me foward.
One thing worth sacrificing everything for.
Making my way through the wastelands of "desolation";
I am not afraid as I use to be, he took that away,
perhaps to make things a little more easier.
he's waiting for me there, and I will not dissapoint.
There is a flame to guide my way, I can see it in the distance.
The closer I draw the clearer it gets, almost there.

Later on,
in the place where there is neither night nor day.
Stepping forward past the welcome sign, there is a celebration.
"Welcome Home.", he runs to embrace me in tears.

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Wolf

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sorry for my selfishness,
its never ending complaints.
You've done so much for me.
I don't deserve everything you've
done for me.

I guess thats why I push you away,
I'm guilty and I know I am wrong.

Its just that I get so frustrated with
this situation. I don't know how to recieve
everything you are doing for me.
I don't know how to take this,

perhaps this is good enough, I wish you could
tell me that this makes you happy alone,
...That way
I know at least this is working. I'm so afraid
that this relationship will fail...I don't want it to fail.
Are you happy with it?

I'm trying to accept that, it bewilders me when
you remain when I try to chase you away..
I don't want to hurt you, and I don't want to
chase you away anymore. Love is scary to me.

..anyway I'll try harder...

I'm sorry,
 
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Siberian_Khatru

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Should I fall out of love, my fire in the light
To chase a feather in the wind
Within the glow that weaves a cloak of delight
There moves a thread that has no end.

For many hours and days that pass ever soon
the tides have caused the flame to dim
At last the arm is straight, the hand to the loom
Is this to end or just begin?

All of my love, all of my love,
All of my love to you.

The cup is raised, the toast is made yet again
One voice is clear above the din
Proud Arianne one word, my will to sustain
For me, the cloth once more to spin

Yours is the cloth, mine is the hand that sews time
his is the force that lies within
Ours is the fire, all the warmth we can find
He is a feather in the wind
 
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Wolf

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Should I fall out of love, my fire in the light​





To chase a feather in the wind
Within the glow that weaves a cloak of delight
There moves a thread that has no end.​

For many hours and days that pass ever soon
the tides have caused the flame to dim
At last the arm is straight, the hand to the loom
Is this to end or just begin?​

All of my love, all of my love,
All of my love to you.​

The cup is raised, the toast is made yet again
One voice is clear above the din
Proud Arianne one word, my will to sustain
For me, the cloth once more to spin​

Yours is the cloth, mine is the hand that sews time
his is the force that lies within
Ours is the fire, all the warmth we can find
He is a feather in the wind​
Wow Led Zepplin :D I like the lyrics, I found them appealing and I had to find out the meaning of the lyrics.
I found different meanings, all confusing.

Should I fall out of love, my fire in the light
To chase a feather in the wind
my interpretation: hes asking "fire in the light" - person he's talking to.
That sounded like a candle that could be seen in the daytime,
candles aren't needed in the daytime but at night,
its a pretty simple plain situation/or relationship without all the bells and whistles.
would have been better suited at night but thats not the situation.
For a "Feather in the wind" - if you ever chased one in the wind,
its like chasing another "love" or dream that
seems unattainable because its always fleeing away from you,
but its hypnotizing because the feather is pretty or fancy.
Should he chase this or that?
Within the glow that weaves a cloak of delight
There moves a thread that has no end.
For many hours and days that pass ever soon
the tides have caused the flame to dim
At last the arm is straight, the hand to the loom
Is this to end or just begin?

All of my love, all of my love,
All of my love to you.

The cup is raised, the toast is made yet again
One voice is clear above the din
Proud Arianne one word, my will to sustain
For me, the cloth once more to spin

Yours is the cloth, mine is the hand that sews time
his is the force that lies within
Ours is the fire, all the warmth we can find
He is a feather in the wind
My interpretation: The fire they share has a special glow, special something,
it creates something beautiful, but there are a lot of obstacles that
cause the cloak (what they created together) to pull apart in time, or fall apart,
there was a lot of suffering, pain and sadness that happened,
they come like waves, peaceful one moment then devastating the next.
there is a lot of hope to this part because he is trying to
renew something that was thought to be dying, or dead,
repairing the cloak, the "life" of it, for the both of them.
Not o sure about Arianne though, I think that there is a meaning to that too
and the thread.
sounds like a "keep going, its gonna be okay, encouragement" song. :)
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Hopefully, I am not wrong in my personal interpretations, I found that pretty interesting, I liked that one.
 
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Wolf

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When Will My Life Begin
Lyrics by: Glenn Slater
Sung by: Mandy Moore


7 AM, the usual morning lineup:
Start on the chores and sweep 'til the floor's all clean
Polish and wax, do laundry, and mop and shine up
Sweep again, and by then it's like 7:15.

And so I'll read a book
Or maybe two or three
I'll add a few new paintings to my gallery
I'll play guitar and knit
And cook and basically
Just wonder when will my life begin?

Then after lunch it's puzzles and darts and baking
Paper mache, a bit of ballet and chess
Pottery and ventriloquy, candle making
Then I'll stretch, maybe sketch, take a climb,
Sew a dress!

And I'll reread the books
If I have time to spare
I'll paint the walls some more,
I'm sure there's room somewhere.
And then I'll brush and brush,
and brush and brush my hair
Stuck in the same place I've always been.

And I'll keep wonderin' and wonderin'
And wonderin' and wonderin'
When will my life begin?

And tomorrow night,
Lights will appear
Just like they do on my birthday each year.
What is it like
Out there where they glow?
Now that I'm older,
Mother might just
Let me go ...
 
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Wolf

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Firebird
Lyrics/Poem by: Lowanla (me)

Onward toward the birth of the night
the bird will fly catching the dying
sun's final fury she will burn inflamed,
Fall and spiral away toward her rest

Rise Anew, Fire Bird, hope a new
Freedom give me wings
Love give me strength
courage kill the fears
time to end the tears.

Its time to put out a dying and dead flame,
to fight for love there is no other way.
Just one more chance, making time, making plans,
all alone, with no real home, just the ocean and sand,
toward the sea of bliss I can see your reflection,
make my way, my strength your memorial affection,

Forgive the situation I am in
I am caught in a web manipulative,
I don't want to hurt you anymore,
don't want to be trapped alone.

Love, give me courage, give me strength,
so that I may honor your lonely grave salvation,
so that all your effort will not be lost,
Actions speak louder than words,
for words are meaningless
so therefore these to your heart must be shown.
To prove my love eternally
I would give only my best. My love burns for you always.
 
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Wolf

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Fire Bird II
by: Lowanla (me)​

There is a dying and dead flame
Upon the table there sit a flattened candle
it was an arranged marriage to an eternity
she was unhappy, dead, always afraid.​

The old candle is gone the flame of the old days
is rising smoke and ash.
The old table has burnt down.
They say she should be ashamed,
for what she has done, they will call her
cruel names.
but why? Why must she be ashamed?
Why must she always be afraid?
My mind was frozen in time,
my spirit was dying,
my flesh was already a demoliton home.​

She sits at the table across from her true beloved,
who had found her frozen alone.
He held her tell she realized his love was true,
and remains by her as true love.
he lights a new flame before her,
his hand over hers.
I can't stop staring into your eyes.​

You broke through my fears with your fire, love,
you rescued me from death, in death I am finally living
to the symphony of your grave song,
and you stayed, you never ran away.
You are my firebird, you showed me how to fly.
I am yours if you still love me,
you have my love, and trust,
My firebird, lighting my way through the night.​
 
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Wolf

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(I realized a made another grammar error! Tell = Till ... :( sorry about that, I hate when I make mistakes... well here it is again rewritten)

Fire Bird II
by: Lowanla (me)


There is a dying and dead flame
Upon the table there sit a flattened candle
it was an arranged marriage to an eternity
she was unhappy, dead, always afraid.


The old candle is gone the flame of the old days
is rising smoke and ash.
The old table has burnt down.
They say she should be ashamed,
for what she has done, they will call her
cruel names.
but why? Why must she be ashamed?
Why must she always be afraid?
My mind was frozen in time,
my spirit was dying,
my flesh was already a demoliton home.


She sits at the table across from her true beloved,
who had found her frozen alone.
He held her until she realized his love was true,
and remains by her as true love.
he lights a new flame before her,
his hand over hers.
I can't stop staring into your eyes.


You broke through my fears with your fire, love,
you rescued me from death, in death I am finally living
to the symphony of your grave song,
and you stayed, you never ran away.
You are my firebird, you showed me how to fly.
I am yours if you still love me,
you have my love, and trust,
My firebird, lighting my way through the night
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Siberian_Khatru

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Your new avatar is cute, Lovesong. :D
 
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Wolf

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All's well that ends without
By: Lowanla (me)

I could not save you
You could not save me
Why did you have to dream me?
Why did I dream you?

Why does God do things like this?
I still feel like he brought you to me
You always encouraged me to live
That is our untold secret
no one will ever believe

Is it weird to dream that you
were meant for me?
This doesn't make sense does it?
Maybe I'm being silly

Please...don't disappear
Don't go away to forever

I love you...
You are important to me
I need you to be ..
even without me

I promise to try to find a reason
to be if you do

Please do that for me
You will always be my good dream
 
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The Curse of Everything

When you have everybody's love
You lose one important thing
Perhaps there is so much to chose
from when you have everything

When you become a god
and you bled out every earned
prosperous golden dream
It's hard to trust
no one is good enough
not even the poor girl
with whom you fell in love

It's understandable
she holds no candle to
your true love:
money, the world you earned,
everything.

You then deserve a
prosperous goddess
who has earned her
prosperity

Who equally has worshippers
and equally paranoid
and as beautiful as thee

If you must have love, trust,
respect, honor, one woman,

You must give up something
and she must equally
give up something

Everything...

Or else fish up a worshipper
of the sea, a trophy
whom will
complete your quest
to be another god of everything

for love is a puzzle piece
Ill fitted equation
It is not perfect
It's meant for
A one hearted two
Bodied person
a union is meant
for that only

But if you were another
god of everything
love fragments to
nothing

That's why you
were so lonely

irony...
how you could not bare
to lose your true love
everything..
Yet you could not hold
love who is nothing

Love is a jealous thing..
that is the irony

Love should be enough

 
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