Christian short story

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SpaceCowboy

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Here's a Christian short story I wrote not to long ago. It's the first short story I ever wrote and I was hoping for some critiques and opinions.

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psychomom

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Wow! It could use a little "red pen" -ing...but, wow!
I got tears in my eyes. :)

Anyone can learn silly language rules to proof read and make editorial corrections, but it takes gift to write.
Keep it up--IMHO you could have a real future there!

Lord Bless
~ellie
 
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SpaceCowboy

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psychomom said:
Wow! It could use a little "red pen" -ing...but, wow!
I got tears in my eyes. :)

Anyone can learn silly language rules to proof read and make editorial corrections, but it takes gift to write.
Keep it up--IMHO you could have a real future there!

Lord Bless
~ellie
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Thanks :) that's very kind of you.
 
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