Six-Gun Sally Series

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virteous_man

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Please I am wanting serious responds I am writing a book and would love your imput. Do you think this story can edify the Body of Christ. Please tell me if you think people would be inspired here is chapter one of the Six-Gun Sally Series.

Six-Gun Sally Series​
Written through inspiration of the Holy Spirit
Chapter 1:Salvation
Upon the midnight barren sky the untold stories of angelic battles and sanctified souls get lost in theology, dogmatics, and traditions of man. How many times have we wondered where does this come from? Who has inspired such a work as this. Well, lets begin our story in the spiritual frontier. The town of Surrender was deeply engulfed in a demonic battle of pride, hatred, malice, and despair. The men and women of this town could not see nor hear the battle crys. However there was a lowly widow woman named Nancy. She was in her late sixites, autumn grey hair. She was a devote woman, she prayed daily, faithfully studied the scriptures, and most importantly repented of all her sins. She was poor and had limted resources, however she was contrite and content for she truly loved Jesus.
The forces of darkness that converged upon Surrender were relentless. The demonic hordes were lead by an ancient evil demoness from Babel. Astar and her pet Baph were wrecking havoc upon this town through all manner of sexual immorality, violence, anger, malice, selfishness, murder, disease and decay. The poor citizens were in utter devastation as her and her pet chomped and would bite at thier heels. You see she was the grand-daughter of Lucifer. Many of the saints of God lived in this mountain town but few had true repentance and walked daily with Jesus. Nancy seeing and hearing the distress upon her hometown cried out to God. "Lord please by all that you hold dear, in the name of Jesus save us from this wicked foe who wars and feeds upon us. I plead the Blood of Christ over this city and over this town in Jesus's name. Amen!"
A feathered prayer of incense quickly rose to the heavenly realm. A decree was cast and a trumpet sounded. The incensed prayer quickly fell to Six-Gun Sally angel of The Living God Most High. Looking at Sally you see a frontier angel with a duster of many colors, a cowgirl hat incased in flame, a western style shirt with "The Cross of Christ" engraved. You see a gunbelt that comes down over her loins with "Truth" engraved. She had a crome pistol in each holster with "Redemption" and "Peacemaker" engraved upon them. On her feet a pair of steel-toe dingo boots with "Gospel" engraved on each one. She sat upon the saddle a marvelous looking horse incased in blueflame, his name was Bluefire her trusted mount. Always accompanying her was twin leopards from birth one male named Brighteyes, and one female named Angeleyes. These magnificent cats had claws of steel and fangs of ivory. Their roar could be heard for many miles.
As Sally received the feathered prayer she quickly whistled, before to long her and her entourage where streaking across the midnight sky. Astar and Baph were making havoc at the local abortion clinic. People of all ages and for all different reasons were coming in to slaughter the innocent not knowing what they did. Astar was feeding herself silly on this pain and death. Baph her pet was off and running around town causeing every kind of lustful emotion and embrace, enticing the community at large. These men and women being enticed by their own lusts were quickly giving into these demonic influences. As a speckled goblin arrives with some unholy orders. The orders read: "Nancy, a saint of the most high is calling for immediate divine assistance. We here at Lucifer Inc. are extremly concerned that she may be of virtue and godliness we must dispatch her so she can no longer pray. Get to work. This comes directly from the CEO." Astar calls her pet they begin to work unholy spells and demon rites. The town now incased in black orbs has many more creatures from the abyss entering in. As Astar, Bamp, and her ungodly horde converge on Nancy. Nancy quickly recognizes three shady criminals coming towards her demanding money and threatening her with violence. She falls to her knees and exclaims "Dear Lord, please forgive them for they know not what they do! Save us JESUS!"
With the voice, with the shout of the archangel the lightening clashes and the thunder roars as Six-Gun Sally decends into Surrender. The demoness and all her cronies quickly realize that an angel as arrived in town. As Sally checks her six-guns she loads each pistol upon each bullet is written 'Blood of Christ". The blue flames coming from Bluefire's nostrils give away her postion. From the east and from the west Brighteyes and Angeleyes take point upon the horde. "Stop!" cries Sally, "You can not take this woman this night, for her time has not yet come." Astar says "Me and my grandfather were kicked out of heaven, what have we to do with you, angel of The Almighty. You can not take me in yet." Sally and Astar lock eyes neither one flinching or backing down. Sally's bellow can be heard in the distance "Maybe, maybe not but if you continue to destroy these little ones, you will be consumed in the brightness of Jesus Christ's coming." "Besides" Sally states matter of factly "Jesus decreed you can not have her, thus we are here."
Astar, Bamp, and her unheavenly horde all smirk as she proudly proclaims "We outnumber you a hundred to one." "Get em" Astar hisses. The entire horde and Bamp converge on Sally, Bluefire, Brighteyes, and Angeleyes. The twin leopards quickly take flanking postions gnashing and clawing at the vicious unclean army. Bluefire starts bucking like a bronco, his blue flamed aura filling the entire area, accompanied by the smell of azure rose. Sally does a summersault off her saddle and fires her 'Holy Bullets" into Bamp. With a evil hiss and flick of her wrist Astar fills the entire area with disease, decay, and death. The hideous poison quickly brings Sally and her pals to their kness. As they begin to cough and bleed from every part of their bodies. Astar raises her scyth like weapon for the killing blow. When with Sally's last breath she cries "JESUS" with the voice, with the shout, with sound of the archangel the clouds of black orbs and decay give way to heavenly healing rain as the thunder clashes and the sky parts. Sally, and her trio encased in divine light are instantly healed, refreshed, and strengethened from their King Jesus.
Six-Gun Sally filled with righteous resolve stands up. Her proclaim is precise and well said "This town is delievered from you this day, now go your way and sin no more." With a evil smirk and a unwilling hiss Astar says "As I said before you have no power over me down here." "Keep it up and you will be imprisoned til your judgement." Sally demands "Move along." Make in the land of living Nancy notices the men no longer look on her with intent. Clearly they are unsure whay they are there. Nancy exclaims 'Praise you Jesus and thank you for your deliverance. Hey you three do you guys believe in Jesus?" One of the men utters some intangible, the other says "Jesus, your crazy lady." The last one who's name is Willy doesn't say a word. "Let's get out of here." the other too say to each other. Nancy quickly realizing that the Holy Spirit is speaking to Willy says "Willy, will you also go?" All three glance at each, they fall silent. One of the young men ask "Willy, do you know her?" "Not at all, never seen her before in my life. What gives lady?" asks Willy. Nancy looks Willy right in the eye and says 'Choose you this day, whom will you serve? The devil and his demons, or Jesus Christ and His holy angels?" Willy without even thinking proudly exclaims "Jesus, I have always believed in Jesus. I choose Jesus." His two buddies Eugene and Alexander start laughing hilariously. 'That's funny Willy, come on lets go." Eugene cracks a smile. Willy looks at his buddies and says "I am sorry guys I can't do this anymore, what we been doing robbing and hurting people. We have to stop or at least I do. My mom loved Jesus, I was raised in sunday school and I miss her." Alex looks him point blank in the face "So we can go find her." "Nah man, I can't introduce you guys to my mom she would freak." "So, what then you gonna kick it with this old lady? She gonna turn you in first chance she gets." states both the boys matter factly. Nancy seeing here says with all boldness "I promise right now before Jesus Christ my Lord and Savior that will not turn any of you boys in if you promise to walk the straight and narrow right now."
Eugene and Alexander both say "we promise lady, we promise." Willy on the other hand does not utter a single word. The two other boys say "Come on lets go, I am hungry. I wanna get my serve on." Willy says "Nah, you guys go ahead." "All right man see you later." the boys say as they walk away. "Excuse me, Mam. How did you know my name?" Nancy with the kindest smile said "Jesus told me your name son, you know who Jesus is don't you?" "Yes Mam, he barly get the words out." Tears started streaking down his face 'I have done some bad things, very bad things. Jesus don't want me no more. He could never forgive me for what I have done." Nancy hugs Willy and says in his ear "Jesus came to seek and save that which is lost, why don't you come and eat dinner with me this evening. You can stay at my house til we figure out how to get you out of this mess." Willy asks dumbfounded "Aren't you afraid I might hurt you?" "Hurt me, this is mircle my boy. Do you not know that heaven rejoice's over one sinner that repents. That angel's cry for the repentant soul." Willy nods and they both start walking off in the midnight air.
Astar's face is angry and filled with hate. "Sally you had no right to hit Willy with that bullet." "I was aiming at your pet, we angels don't, nor can we attack man. That's your job ain't it? Well what do you know the Lord works in mysterious ways don't He."


 
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I have noticed some typo's but they are pretty easily dicerned please leave a reply. Tell me what you think.
 
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virteous_man

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Six-Gun Sally Series poetry:
(inspired by the Holy Spirit)

Six-Gun Sally, angel of Jesus
Six-Gun Sally with her angel wings.
Stands bright and tall as she sings.
Hosanna, hosanna to the Highest.
For Jesus my Soveregin King.
I praise your name with everything.
Six-Gun Sally in her duster of many colors.
Does proclaim, Jesus is His name.
Six-Gun Sally with her hat a flame.
Gives God all the glory.
She won't fall in shame.
Even with her crome pistols.
We can clearly see, that this angel.
Is a witness to you and to me.
This frontier cowgirl dream.
Is a reality in a realm unseen.
Six-Gun Sally wrestles with doubt
I sat I wonder could this really be.
Could this Six-Gun Sally Series
Bring us truth.
I pray I seek direction
Open my eyes to see.
To pertray the angel Six-Gun Sally
On bended knee.

My mind races and I begin to doubt.
Then I let out a shout.
Jesus! Jesus! Jesus!
Could this really be.
Does this Six-Gun Sally Series.
Glorify you or me?

The devil mounts his attack
I pray in the Holy Spirit
Tongues a flame
This series does glorify
Only one name

There is no other name I know.
So doubt is gone.
I can see, Six-Gun Sally.
Praising Jesus gloriously.
Six-Gun Sally, What do you get?
Six-Gun Sally what do you get?
What do you see?
Six-Gun Sally have we meet?
I think it is our destiny.

Six-Gun Sally I can hear,
All the words your crying.
Six-Gun Sally I can see,
Your flapping angel wings flying

Six-Gun Sally wielding the truth.
Proclaiming Jesus!

Six-Gun Sally, angel of the Lord.
I hear the truth can not be ignored.

Six-Gun Sally triumphant sound.
Redemption comes a calling.
Over one sinner who does repent.
Heavenly angels tear's never stop falling.

Six-Gun Sally Praise the Lord!
Jesus to all the glory.
For the angel Six-Gun Sally.
Will never worry.

For her true King, Jesus
Is the only brass ring.
Six-Gun Sally
Six-Gun Sally
With her steal toe boots
Rockets and wheels
And bamboo shoots

Forgotten miracles
Of times long past
I hear the angel's trumpet
For the broken cast

Unfolding leather
Broken joy
Released acceptence
Of her long lost boy

Can you look deep with in
As with this pain
Grappled and tangled
Seasoned and gained.
 
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virteous_man

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Chapter 2: Redemption

Six-Gun Sally felt confident that Astar would stay away for at least a spell. Sally, Bluefire, and the twin leopards quietly walked around Nancy's small humble residence. Willy and Nancy were sitting down to a comfortable meal, talking and exchanging glances. Nancy had her photo book out showing him her late husband Charles's photograph. "He pastored a church for 35 years?" asked Willy "Oh yes he was one heck of a preacher." Nancy stated with nostalgia "I remember back before we got married, the first time I saw him was right here in Surrender at the mountain man revival meeting." She paused for a moment deep in thought. "He was up there preaching he couldn't of been more than twenty-two years old." Nancy's eyes glistened as she shares her heart with Willy. "I was still a senior in high school he was so handsome, his mannerisms were so precise and timed. I remember him speaking of the prodigal son and how Jesus came to seek and to save that which was lost. I was lost at that time Willy, I had never given my heart or my life to Christ. Sure I'd been to sunday school who hadn't." Nancy states rather bluntly. "I remember it like it was yesterday, Charles said if you don't pay attention to another word I say open them ears and hear this. There is no other name given under heaven, among the human race whereby we must be saved. For He is the only propitiation for our sin, there remaineth no other sacrifice." Charles echoed through the revival tent. 'He locked his eyes with my eyes. I'll never forget what he said "Won't you accept and give your life to Christ today, for the field is ripe, but the laborers are few." Nancy takes Willy's hand and says "I fell to my knees and accepted Christ right then and there, we were married 3 months later."

Sally was cleaning her angelic pistols listening to Nancy's story. "Oh yea you remember Charles, don't ya Angeleyes?" she sighs a moment "That beast Hypo-Kracken, I could never forget that battle. Had a stronghold on Charles up til he was twenty-one." Angeleyes purrs as Brighteyes lets out a muffled roar in unison. Bluefire perks his ears up for just a moment, then quietly falls back to sleep. Just as Sally was getting comfortable, Id walks in. Id, was a selfish demon who only thought of himself. Sally twirls her six guns as she places them back in their holster's. 'I wondered who'd show up first." she states rather dryly. Looking at Willy you begin to see divine light coming off him in waves. Angeleyes and Brighteyes quickly get up and growl showing their ivory teeth. 'Looks like you lost this round ole boy. Your services will no longer be required this evening." Sally says gleaming with a high beam smile from ear to ear. 'That's ok, Lucifer will be accusing him before the throne soon enough." Id reveals a sinster smirk as he walks out the cottage.

As the morning dew begins to form on the city of Surrender. Sally remembers fighting the stronghold Hypo-Kracken on Charles's life.
The Kracken the unseen titan of manking comes to the Valley of Serenity to wage war against the saint of the Most High God. Churches and all people of the small town of Surrender ask "Lord, why can't everyone be like me? Why can't these people fear God correctly and walk upright?" The Kracken's unseen master Hypo is happily rideing his titan monster. Hypo knows this is what he likes to feed on. Thinks to himself oh my this town looks delicious. A very small church in the city of Surrender asks Jesus "Lord please help us, the self-righteous seem ready to consume us?" "Lord God Almighty please help!" A trumpet sounds, a decree is cast. The Spirit of the Living God casts such a decree. Who in this frontier can save such a remant as these? A flash of light a burst of thunder, and the quickening emerge's. Six-Gun Sally on her steed Bluefire appears knowing God Almighty has sent her to battle against an ancient foe from Babel. Angeleyes and Brighteyes, Sally's twin leopard cats appear to be following her always mindful of their next task.

As Sally and her heavenly trio decend into Surrender, Angeleyes looks at the Kracken. The Kracken smirks thinking "I am 10 times your size cat." Bluefire's nostrils erupt blueflame's as he snorts, slowly stomping his hoofs. Sally's words are peaceful yet stern. "Hypo you need to move along. The faithful have asked that you clear outta here." Hypo laughs "What? My time is not yet come angel of the Lord Most High!" Sally looks to the left and looks to the right, hands criss-crossed, one on each hilt. Sorry to say, your wrong boy." The King of Kings has decreed your demise after you hung him on a tree." Hypo-Kracken begins to wail and thrash around becoming violent. "You can't kick me outta heaven then force me into a cage." Sally looks him dead in the eye "Who said anything about a cage, Charles don't need you no more,?" As he looks at Charles's divine hue of heavenly light coming from his entire body. Hypo-Kracken starts throwing disease, decay, and pestilance at Sally and her holy trio. "Your gonna pay for that you angel of the Most High God." Sally, Bluefire, and the twins are wounded and suddenly surrounded by a hoard of vile creatures rising from the unforgotten imagination of the abyss. The four are out-numbered, out-gunned, out-matched. Hypo slowly gets off his unholy steed Kracken saying "Sally that all you got, your no match for my six-thousand years of hypocrisy, Your no match for my six-thousand years of pain, death, and illusion!" Hypo moves in for the killing blow.

With Sally's last breath, with her last plea she cries "JESUS!" with the voice with the shout of a archangel, the skies open, the heavens hear her cry. A all consuming rain begins to fall healing Sally, Bluefire, Angeleyes, and Brighteyes. All four rise up, staring hypocrisy down. Hypo quickly gets back on Kracken his unholy steed. Hypo begins to shake, he begins to tremble, he begins to quake in his unholy boots. Hypo knows his days are done, he knows that before him stands JESUS of NAZERETH! Sally pulls out her crome pistols filled with holyfire she looks up to heaven. Jesus gives her a nod! Sally cries "Justice" Sally summersalts in the air as a array of shots ring out. And Hypo-Kracken is no more in the life of Charles the husband of Nancy. A satisfied smile crosses Sally's lips as she reminisces. Heavenly mana begins to fall in the unseen realm of spirit. 'It's time" states Sally with anticipation. Sally begins gathering enough mana for her and her animal trio to last the day. Bluefire is so happy he starts chomping down. Brighteyes and Angeleyes begin playfully ripping their mana apart throwing it up in the air and catching it as they play tag throughout Nancy's cottage. Angeleyes and Brighteyes look so happy as they play together.

Sally recalls one of her fondest memory's way back in time when she meet these too. The twins were just cubs then, barely able to stand. She remembers how these two had been caught in between a fierce tribal war. She thinks to herself, "Wow was it that long ago?" The two cubs lay dead she remembers thinking to herself. "That is such a shame." Then how the grief turned to happiness as a cherub comes running through the field praising the King of Kings, the Lord Most High, the Alapha and Omega. As the cherub touches the cubs, the heavenly child says "The wolf also shall dwell with the lamb, and the leopard shall lie down with the kid; and the calf and the young lion and the fatling together; and a little child shall lead them." Sally looks in amazement, she knows these winged cherubims are always before the face of Jesus. She has just never seen one out in the spirit world. As the cubs arise and look at Sally she hugs them with delight. The cherub asks 'Will you look after them then Six-Gun Sally?" 'Oh yes most definitely, thank you." Sally exclaims full of joy. Sally remembered wondering, "How does an angel have a pet and a mount?" As the cherub flys off, Sally thinks to herself "Wow they are fast." In a instant the cherub is out of sight. As Sally finshes her daydream she exclaims "I was a youngin back then, and I am still learning, the Lord does work in mysterious ways doesn't He boys." Brighteyes lets loose a massive roar in full agreement, as Bluefire snorts and lets out a nicker.
 
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If its written through the 'inspiration of the Holy Spirit' why would you need us to tell you if it will work or not?
 
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virteous_man

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Good point