Are you there?

[Dude653]

Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?

 

[Jennie-Mae]

Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?

I really liked this one.

 

[BillG]

Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?

Beautiful and from the heart.
A heart that God will not reject.

 

[student]

Nice. Very much from the heart.. I almost want to ask if all is well in your spiritual world... Very good work. -student

 

[student]

Would it be alright if I shared this?

 

[Dan_473]

I think you put into words what a lot of people think but are afraid to say.

It reminded me of the Psalms.

 

[Chosen4him]

Its a beautiful poem. Very well written.

 

[Seeker47]

Well done! Those who have had torments tearing at their chest while wondering about the purpose can really relate to what you have written.

 

[oldethennew]

a beautiful poem!
and because of how you have expressed yourself to your Saviour,
He will increase your Faith and address all your doubts and fears...
GBY...

 

[Pumpkinspice]

Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?

I like the birds and the toil very good

 

[DarthStav]

Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?

"Talking to the ceiling" Indeed.

 

[LPT]

 

[becc]

Hello God, it's me. Are you even there?
Can you spare a moment to hear my prayer?
Do you understand just what I'm feeling?
Or am I only talking to the ceiling?
Can you give me the answers I've so desperately sought?
Or has all my service been for naught?
You see I really don't intend any blasphemy.
But could you take a moment to answer me?

You see actions speak louder than words
What was that you said about the birds?
Something about they don't have to toil
So why am I in all this turmoil?

I search and search yet find no rest
This torment, it tears my heart from my chest
But what do I know? A mortal man
Is this all part of your Devine plan?

I loved this soooooo much, God bless you