Lovesong Poetry

[MrsSunflower]

^ Beautiful, Lowanla.

 

[Lovesong]

Hey I thought you left already welcome back for as long as your here and Thankyou. I'm still waitin on your other poem too.

 

[Lovesong]

In fact; I don't see any of those poems above the last one as depressive, since they do have a sign of given hope in it. It might be a bit sad sounding the poem, but when one writes about hope and love in God, it changes over from being negative to becoming positive. Or that's how I see it.


They are all very nice and heartfelt poems. I first liked a lot the "Princess" one, although all of them are very nice in their own given ways. Your last poem there do have a lot of joy over it, very funny reading that one, I can clearly feel "the joy" over it.

I didn't know if you were gonna reply, thankyou

yeah I guess when I write them I feel sad, but when they are read they don't sound too depressive,
which makes me happy that they don't. lol XD

Yeah That joy one makes me think of a little tiny car driving through a valley for some reason XD LOL

 

[Lovesong]

Now we are just waitin on some more poems, Lets not stop the poetry Jam
come on Sunflower, lets go Tjogs, and dude, and whoevers willing to share their heart,
and share their hope to lift our weary spirits!

 

[MrsSunflower]

Hey I thought you left already welcome back for as long as your here and Thankyou. I'm still waitin on your other poem too.

Hmm... Might take some more time with my other poem yet to come. But I might share some other ones in the meantime in here or so too.

 

[Lovesong]

Awesome! I like that snoopy pic btw too snoopy reminds me of my dog Captain Jack. Sometimes poems come spontaneously, which is how I like them, just let em flow, and don't care how they sound, just gotta get em out. Or you can tweak them to fit as well oo. Can't wait to see your poem, too!

 

[MrsSunflower]

You have same dog race as what Snoopy is based from?


Oh, don't worry... I write poems mostly when they just come straight down on my paper, and I don't always think of the outcome sometimes. Sometimes I am even suprised of liking how the outcome of my poem became when I just needed to write down how I felt.

That other poem I meant is the one I have to translate to English. It is different when to translate, especially some poems like the one I wanted to show you might be written not word for word down, can make it loose some of it's charm and not sound as good as in the original version. I will see how it goes, whether it will become quite directly translated or if some few changes has to be done to make it sound as good as it does in Nynorsk.

I normally translate most poems very fine, though then it is either that it has much in commun with the English language too, etc...

 

[Lovesong]

You have same dog race as what Snoopy is based from?


Oh, don't worry... I write poems mostly when they just come straight down on my paper, and I don't always think of the outcome sometimes. Sometimes I am even suprised of liking how the outcome of my poem became when I just needed to write down how I felt.

That other poem I meant is the one I have to translate to English. It is different when to translate, especially some poems like the one I wanted to show you might be written not word for word down, can make it loose some of it's charm and not sound as good as in the original version. I will see how it goes, whether it will become quite directly translated or if some few changes has to be done to make it sound as good as it does in Nynorsk.

I normally translate most poems very fine, though then it is either that it has much in commun with the English language too, etc...

I understand, but like I said before, I don't really see it that way, I look at the heart and the spirit of which the way the poem was written,

but then again I would rather you be comfortable with how you'd like to share it as well. The more genuine and life it has to it the more wonderful it sounds to me. So I'm willing to wait also.

My dog is a Wiener/Snauzer or Wiener Snitzle XD

 

[MrsSunflower]

I understand, but like I said before, I don't really see it that way, I look at the heart and the spirit of which the way the poem was written,

but then again I would rather you be comfortable with how you'd like to share it as well. The more genuine and life it has to it the more wonderful it sounds to me. So I'm willing to wait also.

My dog is a Wiener/Snauzer or Wiener Snitzle XD

Oh well, most of my poems written in Nynorsk I have to check them anyways afterwards to correct the words, since it is not my spoken language, and I want it to sound as correct written in Nynorsk as possible, especially if my poem got some special Nynorsk touch over it.

Sure, some poems in Nynorsk does comes out with a natural flow the way it is written. But this poem I am to translate didn't started like a poem where I put my feelings down. It is like an little story poem. Although, yeah, from my point of view it did also had more symbolism over it, when looked at it in a deeper sense.


Ah, sweet little dog then. We call them "sausage dogs" in Norway, I think. Haha...

 

[MrsSunflower]

A Riverstream

I know a riverstream
from not far away
Where no one can go and drink
nor wash themselves.

A riverstream of salt
that flows out once in a while
Sometimes hidden
and sometimes not.

A riverstream of joy
but also of immense pain
Shakes your spirit
till there is no more left.

A beautiful riverstream
stronger than words
Opens the window to your heart
into the most deepest of your soul.

I know this riverstream
from not far away
They are well known in my eyes
these precious tears of mine.

By: Me.

 

[Lovesong]

Oh well, most of my poems written in Nynorsk I have to check them anyways afterwards to correct the words, since it is not my spoken language, and I want it to sound as correct written in Nynorsk as possible, especially if my poem got some special Nynorsk touch over it.

Sure, some poems in Nynorsk does comes out with a natural flow the way it is written. But this poem I am to translate didn't started like a poem where I put my feelings down. It is like an little story poem. Although, yeah, from my point of view it did also had more symbolism over it, when looked at it in a deeper sense.


Ah, sweet little dog then. We call them "sausage dogs" in Norway, I think. Haha...

Nice! Well its gonna sound doubly awesome.

Yeah My lil Jack is a Sausage Dog and he is a little prince, he knows he's mine cause he follows me around, and cries when I leave, he howls to music sometimes too. When I first got him he was a puppy, I squealed and he shook it was so cute.

 

[MrsSunflower]

Aww... So adorable! We have a dog as well, our first dog; Stjerna. It is a Finnish Lapdog. As a puppy she truly looked like a little ice/polar bear. Lol.

 

[Lovesong]

A Riverstream

I know a riverstream
from not far away
Where no one can go and drink
nor wash themselves.

A riverstream of salt
that flows out once in a while
Sometimes hidden
and sometimes not.

A riverstream of joy
but also of immense pain
Shakes your spirit
till there is no more left.

A beautiful riverstream
stronger than words
Opens the window to your heart
into the most deepest of your soul.

I know this riverstream
from not far away
They are well known in my eyes
these precious tears of mine.

By: Me.

wow now that is deep, I was all like trying to figure it out like a riddle and here the answer was right there at the end. XD

I really like this poem thanks Sunflower its beautiful.

 

[Lovesong]

Aww... So adorable! We have a dog as well, our first dog; Stjerna. It is a Finnish Lapdog. As a puppy she truly looked like a little ice/polar bear. Lol.

lol Beardogs, they are friendly. Did you ever watch that show the dog whisperer?

 

[MrsSunflower]

- Thanks for comment given to my poem.


- No, I have never watched the dog whisperer. Only heard about it being a very good show to watch.
Well, Stjerna doesn't look too much like a ice/polar bear anymore, although she does looks still very furry-like when she has all her furr-coat on. Right now she has lost a lot of furr since the summer. We hope she will get back more soon, hopefully she will look more furry like this winter again. The Finnish Lapdog males has got a lot more furr coat, they look totally like teddy bears.

 

[MrsSunflower]

-God of Wonder-

You are a God of wonder,
you leave me numb,
without any word left.


You are God almighty,
you are my Heavenly Father,
and you care for me.


I don't deserve your love,
but still you love me,
still you care.


I am weak in my sin,
but you are my Healer,
and you set me free.


All my strenght comes from you,
you raise me up,
and makes me ready for a battle.

By: Me.

 

[Lovesong]

- Thanks for comment given to my poem.


- No, I have never watched the dog whisperer. Only heard about it being a very good show to watch.
Well, Stjerna doesn't look too much like a ice/polar bear anymore, although she does looks still very furry-like when she has all her furr-coat on. Right now she has lost a lot of furr since the summer. We hope she will get back more soon, hopefully she will look more furry like this winter again. The Finnish Lapdog males has got a lot more furr coat, they look totally like teddy bears.

Does it get really cold over there? Yeah she probably will. Have you ever dressed your dog up? I do sometimes. I'm a wierdo XD LOL And you are welcome!

 

[Lovesong]

-God of Wonder-

You are a God of wonder,
you leave me numb,
without any word left.


You are God almighty,
you are my Heavenly Father,
and you care for me.


I don't deserve your love,
but still you love me,
still you care.


I am weak in my sin,
but you are my Healer,
and you set me free.


All my strenght comes from you,
you raise me up,
and makes me ready for a battle.

By: Me.

Thats how I feel today undeserving of his love, this is very encouraging.

 

[MrsSunflower]

Does it get really cold over there? Yeah she probably will. Have you ever dressed your dog up? I do sometimes. I'm a wierdo XD LOL And you are welcome!

Yeah, it gets quite cold in The Netherlands. Sure depends from winter to winter. This winter is predicted to being very cold. But then I also hope a lot of snow will come too. Would be pointless having it very cold without any snow around. As well as it brightens up the winter more to having a lot of snow.

Nope, we haven't dressed our dog much. She doesn't needs that, neither would she feel very pleased by it. Lol! Although I do have tried my mut on her for a bit, just to making a very cute picture of her. Lol! Although if you mean dressing up as being a form of joke, that'd be fine for a little short while or so. But dressing her up as in walking outside with her like that; No!

 

[MrsSunflower]

Thats how I feel today undeserving of his love, this is very encouraging.

Happy it does encourages you today.

We should always be ready/prepared for any battle that can come up in front of us everyday, and put on God's full armour. It isn't always as easy everytime we face those wars coming against us from the devil, yet, it is a matter of choice too from our side; Whether we will keep ourselves in a weak position, or whether we are to stand up, put our head high up and walking firm ahead in a stronger position in God.