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Soup of the day = French wallet soup, haha.lol you can also make a soup out of it when you run out of food.![]()
Soup of the day = French wallet soup, haha.lol you can also make a soup out of it when you run out of food.![]()
Soup of the day = French wallet soup, haha.![]()
Behind a Smile
- by Lowanla (me for you)
Lonely
Was only
The catalyst of pain
There really is no one else to blame
For all the choices that led to shame
Could anyone ever really love me?
For everything, that is me.
Well, that depends..
would you believe love if love told you?
Love is alone in the dark eternal
Burning brightly for everyone to see
Blocked by the thin petty walls of a mystery,
The ingredients made from the finest torment and hate,
Protecting you and keeping you safe from your worst fears.
The warm rays peek in from your window pane
Like an old familiar song
So softly
Calling out your name
Come outside and play
With me, I'm so lonely for you
Another day without is a day wasted.
I don't need to suffer to miss you
Cause I already do, even when I am happy,
I think about you every second of the day
I just have a strong smile
A dam that holds back an ocean of tears.
That's heavy.
Open Secrets
It went right by me,
At the time it went over my head
I was looking out the window
I should have looked at your face instead
It went right by me
Just another wall
There should have been a moment
When we let our barriers fall
I never meant what you're thinking...
That's not what I meant at all.
Well I guess we all have these feelings
We can't leave unreconciled
Some of them burned on our ceilings
Some of them learned as a child
The things that we're concealing
Will never let us grow
Time will do its healing
You've got to let it go
Closed for my protection
Open to your scorn
Between these two directions
My heart is sometimes torn
I lie awake with my secrets
Spinning around my head
Something that somehow escaped me
Something you shouldn't have said
I was looking out the window
I should have looked at your face instead.
Well I guess we all have these feelings
We can't leave unreconciled
Some of them burned on our ceilings
Some of them learned as a child
I find no absolution
In my rational point of view
Maybe some things are instinctive
But there's one thing you could do
You could try to understand me
I could try to understand you.
You could try to understand me
I could try to understand you.
I was blinded by a paradise,
(the deception of forethought);
Aghast! Mislead by a dream,
as it were.
But the window is reflective─
Within is of consequence.
I'm sorry if I'm not clear.
Abounding yet in fervor,
the bell tolls
as my gaze drifts
to where I know.
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Hey, thanks.is that yours, if so thumbs upkeep it up
I was blinded by a paradise,
(the deception of forethought);
Aghast! Mislead by a dream,
as it were.
But the window is reflective─
Within is of consequence.
I'm sorry if I'm not clear.
Abounding yet in fervor,
the bell tolls
as my gaze drifts
to where I know.
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Hey, thanks.I think I needed to vent, haha... My style is such a ripoff of Poe! But oh well.
Thanks again for the kudos!
/takes it the wrong way just to be a trollIt's okay to vent, you all listen to me, I can listen to you.
Don't take this the wrong way, but it doesn't sound like Poe, but it does sound like you. Which is a compliment btw,
your writing is very intelligent, and well researched, it excels others by far. I am forced to learn as well when challenged by you, lol. I hope you can digest what I say and realize that you are coming out in your own work.
you are welcome.
...terd. lol/takes it the wrong way just to be a troll
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Aww, well I am certainly not trying to challenge you, but if it's conducive and/or constructive to you, then that certainly is awesome! I think you're poems are very coherent, so yeah ─ I think I digest them as they're meant to be.![]()