Easy Lenny...
Typo Alert!
I meant to type "it was a great sing-along..."
...not a great song.
But, since it triggered your watchdog senses, may I explain...?
I only played the "love, love, love, all you need is love" part to emphasize the main point of the chapter.
It stayed relevant to the lesson, and was a fun departure from boring, droll Sunday school lessons delivered by starched-collared CPAs with a wide, solid colored tie and an introverted personality.
The old saying goes, "Know your audience."
If my mention of that song is offensive, please let me know, and I will delete my entire comment.
I only responded because I thought it would make people smile.
Forgive me... I could blame autocorrect, but I humbly accept responsibility for my sausage-fingers pressing the wrong button on my cell phone...
I discussed your song in #278
Personally, not for me as it's too long.
I think if you cut it down to a few verses and a chorus and an instrumental break, you'd have enough material left for 10 songs.
If you want to tell a gospel story, make it simpler, or if you going to prolong it, you must have a chorus that repeats your main idea.
That way people will remember it, rather than it be a showcase for your voice. Which is great by the way, but the song itself needs some work.
Check out the Psalms, many were short and simple, the long ones had a structure to them that was easily recalled and an order. The longest Psalm had an acrostic structure to it with the Hebrew alphabet. And they also made use of chiastic structure, ie, ABBA pattern.
No I haven't heard thoseOh, sorry, I overlooked it.
I see that you listened to "From Paul to the Proud" and liked the instrumentation.
I attempted to make it sound like what I call gypsy music in the style of Blackmore's Night,
such as "Shadow of the Moon" or "Ghost of a Rose". Have you heard those?
Yes, being a paraphrase of Paul's epistle, it is indeed a scripture in song.
Did you listen while reading along in your Bible?
(I may have heard something by Scripture in Song, but I am not familiar with The Garetts.)
If you are game, I would appreciate discussion/your opinion of the next song in my concept album:
https://groovykerygma.bandcamp.com/track/late-last-night-revelation
As/if you listen, remember that "From Paul" ended by saying that unbelievers will be damned,
and Late Last Night describes/envisions hell.
No I haven't heard those
No I just listened to it
hmm give me a bit of time.
My fave, scripture is from Isaiah
Here are the liner notes for the concept album:
Wouldn't It Be Fine? - A wish for a wonderful world ends with a woeful question.
From Paul to the Proud - The woeful question's answer is sin that ends with damnation/hell.
Late Last Night (Revelation) - Damnation is described with a warning to cease sinning.
Until Set Free - Sin is signified as a woman's fateful choice.
Once Upon a Time - The fateful decision crossed a bridge of no return.
Someday - Lovers contemplate being parted by death.
When You're Alone - A lonely soul feels despondent and dead.
The Power of Love - A dead drug addict is set free by divine love.
Redeemed - A woman rejoices because of becoming redeemed.
Spirit of the Lord - The spiritual body of Christ rejoices together.
Ode to a Young Woman - A woman's beauty and purity inspires praise.
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Bonus tracks:
Burger Queen - A young man encounters a mean girl.
The Perfect Pet - Disillusionment prompts a hard decision.
Born to Lose - A wacky guy doesn't mind mediocrity.
Loser (BTL Redux) - Reprise
Link to the first song:
https://groovykerygma.bandcamp.com/track/wouldnt-it-be-fine
Be blessed!
Not heard of this
The problem with para-christian music is that its just not popular. even if some of it is set to rock style music.
What needs to happen is an already popular artist, releases a gospel song. Or a Christmas song. Or a song that mentions Jesus/God. Or a psalm, or related Bible song.
Like Elvis Presley singing How Great Thou Art.
Or Mariah Carey singing 'O Holy Night' or she and Whitney Houston 'There can be miracles' Boyz II Men 'One Sweet Day'
Whitney also sang 'Jesus loves me'
Cliff Richard 'Millenium Prayer'
The Seekers 'Oh Sinner Man'
Dolly Parton'In the garden' 'Coat of Many Colours'
Mel C 'I don't know how to love Him'
I saw the Seekers in concert some years ago with my Dad. They were great. Now sadly their lead singer Judith Durham has passed away. She had pitch perfect voice. When she sang, it was perfect like she sounded just as she did when she was young.The song was before you were born in the 1970s.
I found inferior versions on YouTube, but hopefully there are better ones
sung by someone like the New Christy Minstrels. The Seekers would be excellent.
Like any genre, it takes some mining to find the greatest hits.
I saw the Seekers in concert some years ago with my Dad. They were great. Now sadly their lead singer Judith Durham has passed awazy. She had pitch perfect voice. When she sang, it was perfect like she sounded just as she did when she was young.
I like the folk-pop music. I can listen to it because the tunes are easy and tell a story, and the guitars have a melody. Also the harmonizing.