Thoughts Of Breezes And Other Things

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DustyRhodes

DustyRhodes

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I love late Autumn afternoons
Prone to random gusts of wind
As they make leaves dance
Across green grass now covered
In brown as they rotted on branches
A sudden whistling from somewhere
Sounding like a distant bamboo flute
Sending reminisces through my vacant
Thoughts of when I was a boy in a lonely
Distant dream making my heart smile.
 
von1

von1

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DustyRhodes said:
I love late Autumn afternoons
Prone to random gusts of wind
As they make leaves dance
Across green grass now covered
In brown as they rotted on branches
A sudden whistling from somewhere
Sounding like a distant bamboo flute
Sending reminisces through my vacant
Thoughts of when I was a boy in a lonely
Distant dream making my heart smile.
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Great poem, your words draw a picture, that I can see in my mind.
 
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