Visiting the cemetery in Autumn.

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lawrence101

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I dropped by the cemetery in weather unfair
It was an autumn day , windy cold
The trees nearby were almost bare
One could sense a new season about to unfold
Countless fallen leaves were all around
Dead leaves that had seen their season
The wind and creaking oaks were the only sounds
In this burial place beyond reason
Some drop by in remembrance of a kin
I guess i dropped by to reflect
Or perhaps its an air to think in
Certainly not have i come here to pay last respects.

Written By: yours true, 30+ years ago
 

Seeker47

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I love this poem. I have had those feelings too. Well done!
 

lawrence101

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Although i wrote that poem a long time ago, it hurts now to read it again since my mother passed away.
 

Seeker47

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The muse of poetry hasn't been around lately; she usually visits in my half-sleep. I'll take a nap now.
 

lawrence101

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The muse of poetry hasn't been around lately; she usually visits in my half-sleep. I'll take a nap now.
You are good, better than i thought, that post speaks pure genius, i can see the poet in you. HAve you posted any poems to the forum ?
 

lawrence101

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Nevermind Seeker, i found them, i was right pure poetry , i knew it. Especially liked Promontory, have to look that word up, well written
 

Seeker47

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Hi Marisolsalina....welcome to Christian Chat. If you are a poetry fan there is lots of stuff on the Poems and Poetry board. Do you write?