YOU'VE BEEN SENTENCED .....

[slave]

I have enjoyed the fellowship of fun with many here in other threads with threads such as "Add A WORD," and others like it where we are simply enjoying each others company in a clean friendly environment. My Hope is to enjoy a new version of the same thing; I call it: "YOU'VE BEEN SENTENCED" - which is a play on words simply meaning to add to a sentence previously written. This is not brain surgery 101, that's my next thread title, Smile (as if); this one is simple.

I will begin a sentence. (Not a paragraph, or word).

The rules - Just add to the storyline in some way to the sentence before you, creating a new sentence that is to be left "open-ended," by way of your phrasing for the next person to be able to easily connect to.....(that's it). ...

Every 100th post: I will show a combined sentence story page, that will show our story (completely updated as a whole story) showing how it is developing. after that update, just simply continue to the next 100th post, as you have been doing, which I, again will add the accumulative sentences as a new update, and so on... and so on..etc., then continue on until the next 100th post.. Etc etc..

So here is an example: 'Sentence one example': The Bee flew loudly around the room and it... )

'Sentence following that one example': ( ... ended up stinging everyone in this thread so now I must... )

'Possible Sentence three example': ( ...go to the Doctor's and get a shot consisting of...)


Get it?...Remember to keep the sentence "Open-ended," meaning without a period, and easily connectable in its phrasing. Ok, are we ready? (Keep it clean, THX).... Ok this is the official starting sentence:


(I am very pleased by what you tell me about this man's relationship with his....) ....>(Next)

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[PeterJens]

He stood on the burning deck wondering how on earth he came there because ....

 

[slave]

He stood on the burning deck wondering how on earth he came there because ....

----->(father?)<---, He stood on the burning deck wondering how on earth he came there because...

 

[slave]

...he had been in a daze and finally arrived here, coming to grips with his most inner issues, his emotions and his ....

 

[NoNameMcgee]

...favorite t shirt he found at a mcdonalds bathroom.....


(pretty good , eh?)

 

[slave]

...favorite t shirt he found at a mcdonalds bathroom.....


(pretty good , eh?)

...he, with memory in tact, and shirt in hand, left what ended up being a fireplace he was standing in at a camp site; becoming lost and emotional he ended up going to...

 

[Pipp]

...he, with memory in tact, left what ended up being a fireplace he was standing in at a camp site; becoming lost and emotional he ended up going to...

The empty church house down the road to spend a little time in prayer... he quietly prayed "Dear Lord......

 

[imfinallyfree]

Why am I standing here with nothing but a t shirt in hand asking you for forgiveness that I don't deserve,

 

[Pipp]

Why am I standing here with nothing but a t shirt in hand asking you for forgiveness that I don't deserve,

Help me to accept your grace and forgiveness... I'll never be able.to thank you enough...Amen" He stood and headed for the door.... he knew it was time to go back home ...

 

[BruceWayne]

However being dazed, he didn't quite know where he was, so he decided to walk down the road, eventually coming to a split-path where he...

 

[WineRose]

However being dazed, he didn't quite know where he was, so he decided to walk down the road, eventually coming to a split-path where he...

came across a nightclub, partied in it, got drunk, and...

 

[slave]

came across a nightclub, partied in it, got drunk, and...

...realized he wasn't as dazed as he thought before, but now he was so dizzy he found his T-shirt in the....

 

[LOLOKGal]

...back pocket of his jeans. He pulled it out to find that someone had written on it. Rubbing his eyes, he focused in on the writing to read, "Unfolding of Your words gives light; gives understanding to the simple. Psalm 119:130" Scratching his head, he said, "huh? Is this a clue?" So he heads towards...

 

[slave]

...back pocket of his jeans. He pulled it out to find that someone had written on it. Rubbing his eyes, he focused in on the writing to read, "Unfolding of Your words gives light; gives understanding to the simple. Psalm 119:130" Scratching his head, he said, "huh? Is this a clue?" So he heads towards...

.....Puerto Rico where his sister lived, and while he walked he read the rest of the book of Psalm, which was no problem, being he started walking from Oklahoma USA, but suddenly while focused on the pages a ......

 

[followjesus]

...back pocket of his jeans. He pulled it out to find that someone had written on it. Rubbing his eyes, he focused in on the writing to read, "Unfolding of Your words gives light; gives understanding to the simple. Psalm 119:130" Scratching his head, he said, "huh? Is this a clue?" So he heads towards...

the only light he noticed with his one eye and off balance posture from all the partying hed done, turns out it was oncoming headlights of an suv with the liscence plate reading " Jesus saves" the driver of the suv....

 

[WineRose]

.....Puerto Rico where his sister lived, and while he walked he read the rest of the book of Psalm, which was no problem, being he started walking from Oklahoma USA, but suddenly while focused on the pages a ......

...wild Pikachu appeared! He eventually caught it and continued his way. But oh no! He realised that he might have dropped his Bible during that intense Pokemon encounter. So he comes back and picks it up from the ground. He checked the pages to see if the book has been damaged, and he found out that the book...

 

[slave]

...wild Pikachu appeared! He eventually caught it and continued his way. But oh no! He realised that he might have dropped his Bible during that intense Pokemon encounter. So he comes back and picks it up from the ground. He checked the pages to see if the book has been damaged, and he found out that the book...

..glowed brightly while ants had climbed onto the pages. to Kyle's surprise, they were literally singing with tiny voices. Baffled and amazed, he leaned ever so slightly inward and could make out that they were collectively singing, in perfect harmony, an "itty-bitty-style" rendition of...

 

[Miri]

glowed brightly while ants had climbed onto the pages. to Kyle's surprise, they were literally singing with tiny voices. Baffled and amazed, he leaned ever so slightly inward and could make out that they were collectively singing, in perfect harmony, an "itty-bitty-style" rendition of....

Three blind mice, three blind mice, see how they run see how they run.....


(psst might work better it we all cope and paste every part of the story into the
next post, then add you extra bit. ).

 

[slave]

...Kyle became flabbergasted and stood erect with eyes alert and all confusion set adrift, then just as quickly as he heard them, they stopped singing and scuttled off the pages. He was now again beside himself, and for the first time decided to look up and ask God what was happening, he said......

 

[slave]

UPDATE:

I am very pleased by what you tell me about this man's relationship with his father, he stood on the burning deck wondering how on earth he came there because he had been in a daze and finally arrived here, coming to grips with his most inner issues, his emotions and his favorite t-shirt he found at a McDonald's bathroom.

He, with memory in tact and shirt in hand, left what ended up being a fireplace he was standing in at a camp site; becoming lost and emotional, he ended up going to the empty church house down the road to spend a little time in prayer...he quietly prayed, "Dear Lord, why am I standing here with nothing but a t-shirt in hand asking You for forgiveness that I don't deserve? Help me to accept Your grace and forgiveness; I'll never be able to thank You enough...AMEN."

He stood and headed for the door. He knew it was time to go back home, however, being dazed, he didn't quite know where he was, so he decided to walk down the road, eventually coming to a split-path where he came across a nightclub, partied in it, got drunk and realized he wasn't as dazed as he thought before, but now he was so dizzy he found his t-shirt in the back pocket of his jeans. He pulled it out to find that someone had written on it. Rubbing his eyes, he focused in on the writing to read, "Unfolding of Your Words gives light; gives understanding to the simple." (Psalm 119:130).Scratching his head, he said, "huh? Is this a clue?"

So he heads toward Puerto Rico where his sister lived, and while he walked he read the rest of the book of Psalm, which was no problem, being he started walking from Oklahoma USA, but suddenly while focused on the pages, a wild pikachu appeared! He eventually caught it and continued on his way.

But oh no! He realized that he might have dropped his Bible during that intense Pokemon encounter. So he comes back and picks it up from the ground. He checked the pages to see if the book has been damaged, and he found out that the book glowed brightly while ants had climbed onto the pages. To Kyle's surprise, they were literally singing with tiny voices. Baffled and amazed, he leaned, ever so slightly inward, and could make out that they were collectively singing, in perfect harmony, an "itty-bitty-style" rendition of three blind mice, three blind mice, see how they run, see how they run.

Kyle became flabbergasted and stood erect with eyes alert, and all confusion set adrift. Then, just as quickly as he heard them, they stopped singing and scuttled off the pages. He was now again, beside himself, and for the first time decided to look up and ask God what was happening, he said.... *(Just keep going now).